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Array ( [sid] => 87840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => living in the void [time] => 2005-03-18 00:16:14 [hometext] => this is a poem about an experience i had today while meditating. [bodytext] => this moment of nothing
no thought
no feeling
no hate
no love
no pain
no pleasure
can't hear my heart beating
can't feel my own breathing
can't see light or dark
cant taste bitter or sweet
can't smell the pigs or the flowers
my only living sence
is that of my mind's eye

I'm visiting a plane
where everything is nothing
in awe of the complexity
inspired by its simplicity
sitting in this vast plane of emptiness
no boundaries
no borders
no walls
no celing
no floor
so enlightened living in the void [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 19 [informant] => tin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

living in the void

Contributed by tin on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:16:14 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

this moment of nothing
no thought
no feeling
no hate
no love
no pain
no pleasure
can't hear my heart beating
can't feel my own breathing
can't see light or dark
cant taste bitter or sweet
can't smell the pigs or the flowers
my only living sence
is that of my mind's eye

I'm visiting a plane
where everything is nothing
in awe of the complexity
inspired by its simplicity
sitting in this vast plane of emptiness
no boundaries
no borders
no walls
no celing
no floor
so enlightened living in the void

Copyright © tin ... [ 2005-03-18 00:16:14]
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Re: living in the void (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:54:06 AM AEST
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though provoking and a unique piece of poetry

Re: living in the void (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:35:02 AM AEST
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Some of us don't have to mediate to feel what you feel. It did make me think though, which makes it a good piece for me.

Re: living in the void (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:36:29 AM AEST
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Living in the void....do you do that often?
Nice write though...different but nice
cheers!~

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