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(For the broken girl)

My heart cries out and feels weak again
As I become attached yet again to another broken girl
She lives in misery and I want to bring her out into the light
But is it my place to does she need me do I need her
How is it that I care for her more than any one?
Ever
And it leaves me emotionally spent
How she pours her self out to me
Making her pain mine
And I accept it
Openly as if
It were
Mine

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My heart cries out (For the broken girl)

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My heart cries out
(For the broken girl)

My heart cries out and feels weak again
As I become attached yet again to another broken girl
She lives in misery and I want to bring her out into the light
But is it my place to does she need me do I need her
How is it that I care for her more than any one?
Ever
And it leaves me emotionally spent
How she pours her self out to me
Making her pain mine
And I accept it
Openly as if
It were
Mine

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-03-17 21:25:32]
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Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:29:38 PM AEST
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Very sad but awesome.
huggs,
emy

Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by Un4GivenSoul on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:52:31 PM AEST
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good poem

Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:57:45 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this. I've had some boyfriends like this and it makes me sad too. Then again, it's nice to know that there is someone out there like you who can love someone like her. I only wish it could be that way for me. Anyhow, greta write. Keep it up.
ALINA

Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:31:31 AM AEST
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wow, this ones beautiful and sad. i reeli like the last line
"Making her pain mine
And I accept it
Openly as if
It were
Mine"
beautiful thought

Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:45:31 AM AEST
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wow this is an awesome write.. makes you think. you can feel the emotion in this great JOB!!

JENNI

Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:01:49 PM AEST
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And it leaves me emotionally spent
How she pours her self out to me
Making her pain mine
And I accept it
Openly as if
It were
Mine

What beautiful words. I am sure she knows how you feel.

This was so lovely

Love Angelxxx

Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:28:30 PM AEST
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wow that was brilliantly written, emotional and moving,
pix xx

Re: My heart cries out (For the broken girl) (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:51:13 PM AEST
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i agree with pixie, a very moving poem. nicely written.

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