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as the long awaited first drops of
March rain fall
And all my feelings
of desperation and attachment
for the broken girl flow away
All because of you and how your words
fill me
in a way that
I am more than whole
I love you,I trust you, I love how you make me feel.
Those words are all I need
All my pain is just
nothing when weighed against
how you make me feel
All the warmth
and joy in your words
is unceasing and all inspiring
How much
I love you
I cannot
measure
for it grows more every day
You are
my world
made beautiful and
real
and I do not just
exist
I am made alive
after years of
being in
darkness
frozen
in light
How you find me perfect
is beyond
me
you
are above me
I will always
love you
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Long Awaited drops of rain

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:21:31 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tears stream down my eyes
as the long awaited first drops of
March rain fall
And all my feelings
of desperation and attachment
for the broken girl flow away
All because of you and how your words
fill me
in a way that
I am more than whole
I love you,I trust you, I love how you make me feel.
Those words are all I need
All my pain is just
nothing when weighed against
how you make me feel
All the warmth
and joy in your words
is unceasing and all inspiring
How much
I love you
I cannot
measure
for it grows more every day
You are
my world
made beautiful and
real
and I do not just
exist
I am made alive
after years of
being in
darkness
frozen
in light
How you find me perfect
is beyond
me
you
are above me
I will always
love you

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-03-17 21:21:31]
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Re: Long Awaited drops of rain (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenblack_phoenix on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:41:00 PM AEST
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It's a nice write, I like it, but it would have, I dunno.... Maybe just gone better with the title if you had kept going with the rain thing? It's a very pretty beginning, I've always been one more for visual words. But the emotion is beautiful, it's very good work.
^-^

Re: Long Awaited drops of rain (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:35:06 AM AEST
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awesome, beautiful poetry. u never cease to amaze me

Re: Long Awaited drops of rain (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:04:20 PM AEST
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Perfect in every way.

Superb

Love Angelxxx

Re: Long Awaited drops of rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:48:44 PM AEST
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Amazing write, another glimpse of a beautiful and talented mind :)

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