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Don’t ever hurt it or tear it apart,
It is so precious & so delicate,
Easily broken so please don’t forget.

It has felt a life time of hurt,
Laid for forever down in the dirt,
That was until you came along,
Now my heart feels with you it belongs.

My heart is like the petals of a rose,
With a little tenderness stronger it grows,
But with harsh treatment & a lot of heartache,
I can tell you my love it will surely break.

Lay it down in its place next to yours,
I hope that never will your soul shut its doors,
My heart has a home, that home is in you,
& it is affected by all you say & all you do.

I gave you my heart & all of my trust,
I hope our love is forever & never will it rust,
So my love take good care of my heart & of me,
As with you for an eternity is where I want to be.
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Take Care Of My Heart

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 07:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Please my love take care of my heart,
Don’t ever hurt it or tear it apart,
It is so precious & so delicate,
Easily broken so please don’t forget.

It has felt a life time of hurt,
Laid for forever down in the dirt,
That was until you came along,
Now my heart feels with you it belongs.

My heart is like the petals of a rose,
With a little tenderness stronger it grows,
But with harsh treatment & a lot of heartache,
I can tell you my love it will surely break.

Lay it down in its place next to yours,
I hope that never will your soul shut its doors,
My heart has a home, that home is in you,
& it is affected by all you say & all you do.

I gave you my heart & all of my trust,
I hope our love is forever & never will it rust,
So my love take good care of my heart & of me,
As with you for an eternity is where I want to be.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-03-17 19:26:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 07:51:00 PM AEST
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Pixie, that was tender and beautiful, and I liked it !!!

Nazzy ~

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:10:18 PM AEST
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A clasic which will last thru all time.
huggs,
emy

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:32:27 PM AEST
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wow, wish i could find someone who felt that way with me. very sweet and emotional.
nice
thanks for sharing

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:00:24 PM AEST
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This is so beatuiful pixie a true statement of love and deep emotion lovely my friend . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:02:59 AM AEST
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i love this poem, i can tell you put a lot of thought into it

you amaze me

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:44:59 AM AEST
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i like this poem too, interesting choice of words you used. Good job!

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:48:33 AM AEST
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excellent write pixie and You can feel the emotion in it.. how true it is about the heart being fragile. awesome job

JENNI

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:16:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, i hope your heart never gets broken.

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:54:00 PM AEST
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Pix i'm sorry i gotta say this...

Loved it!

I really do enjoy your work, though i'm a great commentor.

( I don't kid myself i get all those reads just cause my works good!)

I wish i had the time to go through everybody's work and read.

For as you are probably aware i'm a poetry addict!

And it's only those who have truly suffered who can write with such depth and emotion.

So when you go on a downer after losing next weeks quiz!

I will be expecting another great write!

No pressure...

You aint failed yet!

Johnny.

Re: Take Care Of My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:54:08 PM AEST
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"It has felt a life time of hurt,
Laid for forever down in the dirt,"

That just created such a picture in my mind... a sad, dark, lonely and quite graphic picture.

You've done well with this poem.

Lots of love and peace,

Chelsea

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