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Because she's always in a diguise
She pretends to be someone different
And hides within her faded eyes
She puts on a smile for all who pass by
And makes it all seem alright
But no one knows the true mysteries
That go on in her bedroom at night
She blares on the radio
To cover up the sound of her tears
She cries herself to sleep
She's confused of what she fears
She wants to show her true self
Because she is scared of what "they" will say
So she'll go on pretending
Hoping it will all stop one day
I'm sure you're wondering who
This mystery girl could be
But the answer is very obvious
And soon you all will see...
That mystery girl is...you
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mystery girl

Contributed by allymp on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 04:39:34 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

I know a girl who you don't know
Because she's always in a diguise
She pretends to be someone different
And hides within her faded eyes
She puts on a smile for all who pass by
And makes it all seem alright
But no one knows the true mysteries
That go on in her bedroom at night
She blares on the radio
To cover up the sound of her tears
She cries herself to sleep
She's confused of what she fears
She wants to show her true self
Because she is scared of what "they" will say
So she'll go on pretending
Hoping it will all stop one day
I'm sure you're wondering who
This mystery girl could be
But the answer is very obvious
And soon you all will see...
That mystery girl is...you

Copyright © allymp ... [ 2005-03-17 16:39:34]
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Re: mystery girl (User Rating: 1 )
by aphrodite153 on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 04:48:22 PM AEST
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i absolutely love your poem! It's just the kind of poem i like and this is absolutely fantastis. i can really relate to this poem.

Re: mystery girl (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:04:40 AM AEST
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just so you all no because is supposed to be but

because=but

Re: mystery girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:27:05 AM AEST
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I think you could have called it mystry person--doesn't it fit all teenagers searching for themselves.
Good write.
Sinned

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