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Array ( [sid] => 87697 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hangover [time] => 2005-03-16 21:44:47 [hometext] => I dont know.... [bodytext] => Another Day
I wake up to this
World of sorrow
I turn up the covers
Crawl out of bed
The sound of birds chirping
Echoing in my head
I stumble around until
My vision is clear
I shouldn't have
Drank that one last beer
Walk to the kitchen
Grab a cup of coffee
The caffine
Intoxicating me
My stomach feels
Queazy
Pop a few
Tylenol head off
To work
Eyes as red as cherries
I sit at my desk
Stacks of paperwork
Awaiting me
I look at them
With great enthusiasm
Just another
Hangover I wish I didn't have [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Les4567 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Hangover

Contributed by Les4567 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:44:47 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Another Day
I wake up to this
World of sorrow
I turn up the covers
Crawl out of bed
The sound of birds chirping
Echoing in my head
I stumble around until
My vision is clear
I shouldn't have
Drank that one last beer
Walk to the kitchen
Grab a cup of coffee
The caffine
Intoxicating me
My stomach feels
Queazy
Pop a few
Tylenol head off
To work
Eyes as red as cherries
I sit at my desk
Stacks of paperwork
Awaiting me
I look at them
With great enthusiasm
Just another
Hangover I wish I didn't have

Copyright © Les4567 ... [ 2005-03-16 21:44:47]
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Re: Hangover (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:57:50 PM AEST
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you've got to hate those days. lol.

Re: Hangover (User Rating: 1 )
by AfterLivingDeath on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:30:14 PM AEST
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those are the worst. i've seen ppl literally turn green from hangovers. but they just smoke a few bulls and its all better.
ALD

Re: Hangover (User Rating: 1 )
by brains_of_the_insane on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:53:33 PM AEST
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I really like how you put the words together, I think that this is a really good poem. Good write!

Re: Hangover (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:58:42 PM AEST
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these were the best lines,
"Another Day
I wake up to this
World of sorrow" your ending was original, and nothing should take away from that either. an excellent poem well expressed. you have a unique style that is refreshing. maybe the next day wont be another day....

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