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There’s countless ghosts inside my head

Emotions cut down so they’re never felt

Echoing forever, almost dead

I know they’re there but I can’t feel them

Inside a while other world I can’t touch

Existing but simply just not wholly there

And living on sight just isn’t enough

And I’m tired of being alone in the darkness

With no friends or feelings to fill up the void

Even pain I wish I could experience finally

But most of all love, excitement, and joy

The world spins around me, blurs, always moving

Everything else progresses but me

And I look at the glass globe that contains all my feelings

Wishing I could break it, set its prisoners free
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Ghosts

Contributed by highly_flammable on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:58:01 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I feel like I’m not really living

There’s countless ghosts inside my head

Emotions cut down so they’re never felt

Echoing forever, almost dead

I know they’re there but I can’t feel them

Inside a while other world I can’t touch

Existing but simply just not wholly there

And living on sight just isn’t enough

And I’m tired of being alone in the darkness

With no friends or feelings to fill up the void

Even pain I wish I could experience finally

But most of all love, excitement, and joy

The world spins around me, blurs, always moving

Everything else progresses but me

And I look at the glass globe that contains all my feelings

Wishing I could break it, set its prisoners free

Copyright Â© highly_flammable ... [ 2005-03-16 20:58:01]
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Re: Ghosts (User Rating: 1 )
by AfterLivingDeath on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:51:37 PM AEST
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i really liked this. i can relate to it a lot. i'm always getting thoughts to go around in my head over and over again.
ALD

Re: Ghosts (User Rating: 1 )
by echo03 on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:06:24 PM AEST
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wow i loved that!!!!! i feel like that so many times......rhianna i will be there......i love you, even if you think i am deserting you cause of ian i want you to know you are still number one on my list * not in a lesbian way of course* lylas mysm............koren

Re: Ghosts (User Rating: 1 )
by PuppyChow on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:30:53 PM AEST
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Thanks Rhi for posting my poem w/ out!!!!!GIVING ME CREDIT!!!!
**yes this is Hannah, whom she has posted poems for in the past but NO LONGER!!!**

Re: Ghosts (User Rating: 1 )
by PuppyChow on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:41:03 PM AEST
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To all who read this poem:Rhi accidentally forgot to put my name on it, as she has posted others of mine in the past. she accidentally forgot to give me credit. if you dont believe me, ask her- im being honest here. **sorrt rhi my last comment was very indignant but im not mad anymore**-hannah

Re: Ghosts (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST
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well its good but i neva feel this way and doubt others do we all feel it n a diff way but hell what do i know

Re: Ghosts (User Rating: 1 )
by highly_flammable on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:35:30 PM AEST
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yes. i apologize to everyone who read this poem under false pretence. it is hannah's. i was in a rush when i did this, simply copying and pasting, as she sent it to me. when i pasted this, she didnt have an account and asked me to do it for her. once again, im sorry, especially to hannah.

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