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Array ( [sid] => 87660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waking Dream [time] => 2005-03-16 17:55:58 [hometext] => Will I ever find the one .........?Maybe I'll wake from this long slumber soon. Please share your impressions... [bodytext] => Breath in my soul
travel out of time...the velvet road
Bath in our light
further than my need you reach inside.

You are deep,
the endless sea
beauty on the wind
my waking dream.

Your love a gentle kiss upon my face
that lights a burning fire born of grace
and with the healing warmth
my vision clears
I see the naked truth beyond my fears

Tears of tender love is what you bring
the pain of empty years
the sweet release
Our bodies you and I
pure and free
Our bodies you and I...
unity!

You are deep
the endless sea
beauty on the wind
a waking dream
my waking dream!!! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Waking Dream

Contributed by stover on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Breath in my soul
travel out of time...the velvet road
Bath in our light
further than my need you reach inside.

You are deep,
the endless sea
beauty on the wind
my waking dream.

Your love a gentle kiss upon my face
that lights a burning fire born of grace
and with the healing warmth
my vision clears
I see the naked truth beyond my fears

Tears of tender love is what you bring
the pain of empty years
the sweet release
Our bodies you and I
pure and free
Our bodies you and I...
unity!

You are deep
the endless sea
beauty on the wind
a waking dream
my waking dream!!!

Copyright © stover ... [ 2005-03-16 17:55:58]
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Re: Waking Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 06:16:07 PM AEST
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Your poetry was so beautiful , I was able to sing to it! You'll find the right one, just dont lower your standards, and keep believing in ur dream. Until then focus on you and on God!
I'm waiting and taking my time to become who I want to be before I let another men in. Relationships can be a distration to what u really want in life. Sometimes I feel down because I am the last of my cousents of my age group not to have any kids and to still be single , I dont even go to my family reunions n e more. But I do know I have travled I will be going to school soon and I will accomplish my dreams before ending my single life and entering into a life long dream that will forever be shared with one person.
When you find that one person nothing is just yours anymore not even your thoughts, you are one! So take time and dont rush things the right person will come along, but right now you are the right person for you, fulfill your dreams take to your ambition, and then follow through with the American life long dream. Once you start that you cant turn back.

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