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Array ( [sid] => 8766 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Solitude With You [time] => 2002-12-17 19:40:00 [hometext] => i wrote this whilst i was reading romeo and juliet again, just made me think of how it would have been if the play had been written in another time..... [bodytext] => As black ravens fly, snow outside
Silently falls
Innocence and purity is all I desire
As i fall,
Yet again,
Into my pit of depression
You peacefully pass me by.

The virgin snow slowly turns black
As my footprints are left behind
The weak die young;
Young and weak like me,
You are strong and you leave me last

Alone again and wishing for peace
My life ends
The knife in my hands finally grants me the relief that I have so long needed

You are again by my side
Happiness and hope is within us
The future becomes my guiding light
And all I feel is love

As bluebirds soar in the saphire sky
My wounds heal and my mind is clear
Tranquil,
Painless,
My life is complete
Complete and you are by my side.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BabyLuby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Solitude With You

Contributed by BabyLuby on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

As black ravens fly, snow outside
Silently falls
Innocence and purity is all I desire
As i fall,
Yet again,
Into my pit of depression
You peacefully pass me by.

The virgin snow slowly turns black
As my footprints are left behind
The weak die young;
Young and weak like me,
You are strong and you leave me last

Alone again and wishing for peace
My life ends
The knife in my hands finally grants me the relief that I have so long needed

You are again by my side
Happiness and hope is within us
The future becomes my guiding light
And all I feel is love

As bluebirds soar in the saphire sky
My wounds heal and my mind is clear
Tranquil,
Painless,
My life is complete
Complete and you are by my side.

Copyright © BabyLuby ... [ 2002-12-17 19:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Solitude With You (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 08:01:09 PM AEST
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Very good poem!

Re: Solitude With You (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:02:07 PM AEST
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yes, this is a very good poem. i'll be reading more of yours.

Re: Solitude With You (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:02:07 PM AEST
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yes, this is a very good poem. i'll be reading more of yours.

Re: Solitude With You (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:54:15 PM AEST
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Ah Romeo and Juliette in another time....this is beautiful the way you wrote this all out...and the last line of the poem is so fitting....Complete and you are by my side...i enjoyed reading this one thanks for sharing it...Keep em' coming...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Solitude With You (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 03:00:26 PM AEST
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beautifully written and a wonderful exploration

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