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I, the hypocrite am
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 02:13:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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So counting calories
makes me a hypocrite
twisting the scale
the numbers
to read "valuable"
means i'm selfish
give the world
exactly what they hate
taste it, test it
my life is a debate
i'm sick and sad
sorry and bad
no one sees the weight
the heaviness of my insides
i'm weighting, constantly
weighing
for worth
am i?
am i valuable
no i'm a hypocrite
so love this
scale 68 pounds
love this the rib abacus
i'm empty and now you see
i'm no hypocrite
i'm the sane one
the unrelenting
to show the world
exactly the portrait
of my innerbeing
i am starving
i am weak
i am brave
i am sick
i am tormented
i am disinigrating
i am distorted
i am abusing
i am screaming
i am choosing
i am hurt
i am empty
the murderess
all pretty and frail
break me
i am the ***** hypocrite
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Re: I, the hypocrite am
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 02:32:04 AM AEST
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Like the beetles say just let it be! you are your soul not your mind tell your mind to take a rest! |
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Re: I, the hypocrite am
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by Alina on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:03:24 PM AEST
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WOW! This poem hit me hard. i have these feelings all the time. i can't give you advice because I don't know you and your troubles, but keep writing becasue you're great at it!!
ALINA
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Re: I, the hypocrite am
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 01:05:30 AM AEST
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| s***, this rox, well done |
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