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Array ( [sid] => 87611 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Water [time] => 2005-03-16 01:14:04 [hometext] => I am down here in South Carolina, my husband is painting near Conway, I love it here. It is sooooooooo warm! [bodytext] => Black water runs beside this place.
Cypress trees stand tall.
River to swamp to lake,
all called the Waccamaw.

Black water shallow here near the edge.
Water lapping at the shore.
Rippled patterns made in the sand.
These beautiful etchings I could not ignore.

Many boats going out today,
weather so nice and warm.
Folks fishing and relaxing.
Mother Earth today seems...
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Black Water

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:14:04 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Black water runs beside this place.
Cypress trees stand tall.
River to swamp to lake,
all called the Waccamaw.

Black water shallow here near the edge.
Water lapping at the shore.
Rippled patterns made in the sand.
These beautiful etchings I could not ignore.

Many boats going out today,
weather so nice and warm.
Folks fishing and relaxing.
Mother Earth today seems...
in excellent form.

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2005-03-16 01:14:04]
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Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:17:23 AM AEST
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Aaaaaaah South Caralina, I was wrong, smile.
Another beautifull write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:28:07 AM AEST
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That is beautiful and just what ive been longing for. I live in P.A. so fat chance for me right now,LOL!

Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 06:17:07 AM AEST
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A beautiful heart warming write, Laura.
The imagery u cast in the readers mind is absolutely sensational. A delightful read

Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:02:43 PM AEST
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A very poetic description of your beautiful environment.... by writting a beautiful poem.

Thanks for sharing, my friend

Willofree, Terry
PS Up here in cold WI.

Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 03:32:37 PM AEST
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LOL nice poem u and my 2 daughters ought

2 get 2gether, every day i get updates from

them about the temprature in florida 4 the

day LOL, nice poem . . . peace 2u my sister

Dorian Chambers

Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 04:36:42 PM AEST
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wow, i'm there shirt off, laying in the grass, totally relaxed. OUTSTANDING.

Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:12:12 PM AEST
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=], seems like alabama, except a little too warm for my tastes often enough. i thought this was an excellent poem because of the rhyme and rhythm. i sit impressed by this one, just as your haiku of peace acheived. =]

Re: Black Water (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:13:20 AM AEST
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A exceptional write here so full of great imagery so beautiful and breathtaking your words have captivated me into the poem and so loving it Excellent write
Cathy

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