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Array ( [sid] => 87582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Place [time] => 2005-03-15 20:07:11 [hometext] => Please comment on this. I need feedback, I am only 14 and I need to know if my writing is any good. Thank you. [bodytext] => I need a place
I can call my own
A place that is
my own home
A place where
I can be alone
and think
of all
the gifts I
own
It took me
awhile
to find myself
a place where
I can
be myself
I found it in
a place
concealed from
all
though it has
not a
wall
The place I found
is all
mine
Where I can
be myself
and shine
I found it
in the most peculiar place,
a place of
lines,
a place of
order,
a place of
curious
wonder
Here it is,
right here
I seemed to
have made
home on a piece
of paper

-Kortnie- [comments] => 9 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 43 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My Place

Contributed by justme03 on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:07:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I need a place
I can call my own
A place that is
my own home
A place where
I can be alone
and think
of all
the gifts I
own
It took me
awhile
to find myself
a place where
I can
be myself
I found it in
a place
concealed from
all
though it has
not a
wall
The place I found
is all
mine
Where I can
be myself
and shine
I found it
in the most peculiar place,
a place of
lines,
a place of
order,
a place of
curious
wonder
Here it is,
right here
I seemed to
have made
home on a piece
of paper

-Kortnie-

Copyright © justme03 ... [ 2005-03-15 20:07:11]
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Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:11:15 PM AEST
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hey i like your writting its amazing. your a really good writter at your age~~ Crystal~~

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:24:49 PM AEST
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i like the arrangement of this as well as how its written, well done

... in words electrique

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:52:08 PM AEST
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Very good writing as it shows the impotence of pen-n-pad and the awesome freedom in writing.
Keep it up as this is a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:54:51 PM AEST
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I really liked this. I hope you share some more with us.

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:08:30 PM AEST
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Very good. Much better than I would expect from a fourteen year old. Please, keep writing. Your off to such a good start. Good luck to you and God bless you.

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:53:33 PM AEST
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Ahhhh...Yes another great writer...so far...That I can add to my list of like 5 or 6 at this site....I really like this poem and it really struck home.....Great job and I'll be waiting for more...Because It reminds me so much of my own poems....Again great job

Clark

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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I must say you are quite talented. You write much better than i did at your age. I think you will grow to be an amazing poet. You used great imagery. I love the format most of all. Keep writing. You were born for it.

~Alucia~

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:48:47 AM AEST
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Wow for a 14 year old you sure do know how to write, keep writing sweetie and i'll check more of your poems soon.

Jane ^_^

Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by suesan on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:29:56 PM AEST
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you can realy tell when something comes from the heart! I Loved it

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