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Array ( [sid] => 87577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Silence [time] => 2005-03-15 19:38:12 [hometext] => Please comment on this. I need feedback, I am only 14 and I need to know if my writing is any good. Thank you. [bodytext] => The silence is deafening
I can no longer think
The silence is deafening
the sound my ears meet
The silence is deafening-
filled up with sounds
that pass through the air
and over the grounds
I sit in the silence-
awaiting my fate
I sit in the silence-
a long time to wait
I sit in the silence-
the time passing me by
Sometimes I wonder
why I even try

-Kortnie- [comments] => 5 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 25 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

The Silence

Contributed by justme03 on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:38:12 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

The silence is deafening
I can no longer think
The silence is deafening
the sound my ears meet
The silence is deafening-
filled up with sounds
that pass through the air
and over the grounds
I sit in the silence-
awaiting my fate
I sit in the silence-
a long time to wait
I sit in the silence-
the time passing me by
Sometimes I wonder
why I even try

-Kortnie-

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Re: The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:42:14 PM AEST
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good work. I think we all have these moments of silence from time to time when we really wonder why.
Keep writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:54:53 PM AEST
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i like that. keep writing. id like to read more

Re: The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST
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Awesome piece. I enjoyed the flow of it. Nice work. You're very talented.

Re: The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:01:06 PM AEST
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the only problem I have with this poem is that you repeated "The silence is deafening" and "I sit in the silence-"....I would have liked it better if you would have used different words getting the same message across...but still an amazing poem....I'll be waiting for more...

Clark

Re: The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 07:27:46 PM AEST
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I know this poem is old, but its still very good...sorry I had to see your old work lol

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