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Array ( [sid] => 87554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Angel [time] => 2005-03-15 17:26:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Out of everything in the world,
You're the first thing on my mind.
If you dig deep inside my soul,
Im sure that you will find...

A broken hearted angel,
With no place to hide.
All she feels is love,
That burns her deep inside.

Once we were in heaven,
Now alone I rot in hell.
I wish I never loved you,
But that's just the way I fell.

Honest lies and heavy tears,
Fall dangerously to the ground.
That bitter angel weeps,
Yet her screams make no sound.

Our love reached a depth,
No man nor beast could swim.
But oneday a beast swam by,
And tore me limb from limb.

A devil reached her tower,
And tore apart her wings.
The sounds of heaven are sweet no more,
For the tainted angel no longer sings.

My only lover left me there,
To sew the pieces of my broken heart.
Everytime I try and fix it,
The stiches fall apart.

For no thread could hide,
The ache of her pain.
As the broken angel weeps,
Alone she dies in vain.

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Broken Angel

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 05:26:58 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

Out of everything in the world,
You're the first thing on my mind.
If you dig deep inside my soul,
Im sure that you will find...

A broken hearted angel,
With no place to hide.
All she feels is love,
That burns her deep inside.

Once we were in heaven,
Now alone I rot in hell.
I wish I never loved you,
But that's just the way I fell.

Honest lies and heavy tears,
Fall dangerously to the ground.
That bitter angel weeps,
Yet her screams make no sound.

Our love reached a depth,
No man nor beast could swim.
But oneday a beast swam by,
And tore me limb from limb.

A devil reached her tower,
And tore apart her wings.
The sounds of heaven are sweet no more,
For the tainted angel no longer sings.

My only lover left me there,
To sew the pieces of my broken heart.
Everytime I try and fix it,
The stiches fall apart.

For no thread could hide,
The ache of her pain.
As the broken angel weeps,
Alone she dies in vain.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-03-15 17:26:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:18:33 PM AEST
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1.) Out of everything in the world,
You're the first thing on my mind.

2.) I wish I never loved you,
But that's just the way I fell.

I like the first part I picked out because it shows how important the person you're thinking about is. I liked the second part because I think its cute. The way you "fell" was in love. An overall good write. You should be proud of this one.

--Kara

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