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Moving On
Contributed by
Tommage
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:40:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I still feel like when im in your armz nothing else matterz
Im sorry that because of me everything iz in tatterz
Im sorry im tryin to hold onto sumthin that iznt there
I guess i like 2 think there iz, plz dnt think itz unfair
Thingz are gettin easier and i know u need to go
I guess we both kinda wish deep down that wasnt so
But thingz hav changed n we're no longer together
I hope u find happiness n are happy forever
I wud hav prefered thingz to hav worked out
But i guess the right man 4 u iz sumwhere about
Plz remember i loved you
Your beautiful
Copyright ©
Tommage
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2005-03-15 16:40:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Moving On
(User Rating: 1 ) by helianthus on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:55:46 PM AEST (User
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I like the slang and the "z"s at the end of your wordz. Don't try too hard to rhyme, it changes everything. This was a very good farewell poem. Thanks, Lis |
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Re: Moving On
(User Rating: 1 ) by helianthus on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:56:49 PM AEST (User
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I like the slang and the "z"s at the end of your wordz. Don't try too hard to rhyme, it changes everything. This was a very good farewell poem. Thanks, Lis |
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