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Array ( [sid] => 8752 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2002-12-17 13:00:00 [hometext] => For those I have lost and those still to come. [bodytext] => I sit here thinking of life’s regrets.
Picturing how things could be.
I wonder if there was a way to write the wrongs.
Would I still be me?

I have done many stupid things
Some huge and some small.
But all important parts of life/
It can all come to a wrong turn, or a short fall.

But all the choices had a purpose
I don’t know it all, but I know part.
It is enough to prove I have no regret.
Even if I haven’t always been smart.

My mistakes have made me what I am
I have always known this is true.
And I know deep down I have done right.
My choices brought me close to you.

You have made my life a happy place,
Always there when I need you.
Memories locked inside my head.
For this I will always love and care for you.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Jake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

untitled

Contributed by Jake on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I sit here thinking of life’s regrets.
Picturing how things could be.
I wonder if there was a way to write the wrongs.
Would I still be me?

I have done many stupid things
Some huge and some small.
But all important parts of life/
It can all come to a wrong turn, or a short fall.

But all the choices had a purpose
I don’t know it all, but I know part.
It is enough to prove I have no regret.
Even if I haven’t always been smart.

My mistakes have made me what I am
I have always known this is true.
And I know deep down I have done right.
My choices brought me close to you.

You have made my life a happy place,
Always there when I need you.
Memories locked inside my head.
For this I will always love and care for you.

Copyright Â© Jake ... [ 2002-12-17 13:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:08:06 PM AEST
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Nice job, Jake.

Keep writing and developing poems. Also, consider deviating from a four bar stanza... maybe in the future you could try a 3 or 5. Anyway, good poem and I will be looking for some others.

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:20:07 PM AEST
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I hope the person that you love is going to read this because it's beautiful... welcome to YPDC Jake i look forward to reading more of your poetry...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Cutey on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 02:06:54 PM AEST
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Wow that was so very beautiful keep up the great work that was so very wonderful i loved it i can see you have a lot of love for the person you did this about i'm ready to read more from you.
from Cutey

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:10:11 PM AEST
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thats also really good jake. keep sharing

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