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Array ( [sid] => 87519 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => gave you my heart [time] => 2005-03-15 10:01:48 [hometext] => ~** to my ex whom i hate amd hope he rots in he11 **~~ [bodytext] => you told me you loved me
told me i was ur one
told me it was forever no matter what
and i gave you my heart

you promised me i find no other girl
but that was a lie
told me u didnt care what people said
so i gave you my heart

I gave you my heart and you tore it to peices
thought i was your one and only but
i was your mistress

i hate you and i hope that she does to you
what you did to me... but i have to thank you
if you hadnt done to me what you did
i would have never met my one true soul
mate

so thank you and rot in hell [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Formerly_known [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

gave you my heart

Contributed by Formerly_known on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:01:48 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

you told me you loved me
told me i was ur one
told me it was forever no matter what
and i gave you my heart

you promised me i find no other girl
but that was a lie
told me u didnt care what people said
so i gave you my heart

I gave you my heart and you tore it to peices
thought i was your one and only but
i was your mistress

i hate you and i hope that she does to you
what you did to me... but i have to thank you
if you hadnt done to me what you did
i would have never met my one true soul
mate

so thank you and rot in hell

Copyright © Formerly_known ... [ 2005-03-15 10:01:48]
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Re: gave you my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:31:45 AM AEST
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Wow...this guy sounds like a really big jerk, but at least you found someone else great job hun

Re: gave you my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:37:02 AM AEST
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Ouch.
You don't need him, it sounds like he doesn't deserve you.
Good you found someone else.

Good write, you need to look at your grammar a little bit though, maybe capitalise some words.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: gave you my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:01:17 PM AEST
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woah...the anger...nice write dear

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