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Array ( [sid] => 87518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Way (new posting) [time] => 2005-03-15 09:28:44 [hometext] => There was one spelling error in the older posting, so I've changed it in this one. [bodytext] => Dedicated to my friends from Camp Stella Maris



The skies were blue
(Underneath the clouds)
And the grass was a brownish green.
The sounds of children all around
Made it far from serene.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

Oh sure the water may've been cold,
(but then again, when wasn't it?)
Despite then, whatever you're told
Go take a quick jump in it.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

The food was good
(alright, sometimes)
And the games were pretty fun.
But what I'm sure that I won't miss
Is burning in the sun.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

The friends we made were the best yet
No better could be found.
We'll leave here without one regret,
Having found a common ground.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

We'll leave
(oh sure, oh yes we will)
And go our separate ways.
No matter what will happen now
In eachother's hearts we'll stay.

It's not okay
(I really do care)
I don't want it this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget you, no way. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => olivetreedove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
No Way (new posting)

Contributed by olivetreedove on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:28:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Dedicated to my friends from Camp Stella Maris



The skies were blue
(Underneath the clouds)
And the grass was a brownish green.
The sounds of children all around
Made it far from serene.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

Oh sure the water may've been cold,
(but then again, when wasn't it?)
Despite then, whatever you're told
Go take a quick jump in it.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

The food was good
(alright, sometimes)
And the games were pretty fun.
But what I'm sure that I won't miss
Is burning in the sun.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

The friends we made were the best yet
No better could be found.
We'll leave here without one regret,
Having found a common ground.

But that's okay
(I don't even care)
I like it better this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget it, no way.

We'll leave
(oh sure, oh yes we will)
And go our separate ways.
No matter what will happen now
In eachother's hearts we'll stay.

It's not okay
(I really do care)
I don't want it this way.
I had a wonderful time here, and,
I'll never forget you, no way.




Copyright © olivetreedove ... [ 2005-03-15 09:28:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: No Way (new posting) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:49:51 AM AEST
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great job, very descriptive


Re: No Way (new posting) (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:42:58 AM AEST
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I like this, it almost seems like a song though. lol.

Good descriptions and images.
I adore the repeated piece, it doesn't make the poem too long, it makes it just about right.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: No Way (new posting) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:39:32 AM AEST
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sounds like fond memories you shared with us I like the descriptions and images you placed within
Michelle




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