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Array ( [sid] => 87498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moment's Decay [time] => 2005-03-15 00:00:58 [hometext] => This just came out tonight... lol to me, it sounds real good when i have on the dark/sad music in the background. [bodytext] => Watch as raindrops fade
and cry these lonely tears of jade.
Learned too late how words can kill,
learned to hate your every thrill.

Lonely cries to lonely
to catch my tear's blue pain.
Screams give way to sobbing
despite all efforts to contain.

Unchain my demons to eat away,
surrender to the moment's decay.
Seek weak metaphors to explain,
cry uniqueness in this stain.

Leave me here in silence,
you won't hear the blame in this voice.
Don't feel regret when memory fades,
there's no reason not to rejoice. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => waos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Moment's Decay

Contributed by waos on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:00:58 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Watch as raindrops fade
and cry these lonely tears of jade.
Learned too late how words can kill,
learned to hate your every thrill.

Lonely cries to lonely
to catch my tear's blue pain.
Screams give way to sobbing
despite all efforts to contain.

Unchain my demons to eat away,
surrender to the moment's decay.
Seek weak metaphors to explain,
cry uniqueness in this stain.

Leave me here in silence,
you won't hear the blame in this voice.
Don't feel regret when memory fades,
there's no reason not to rejoice.

Copyright © waos ... [ 2005-03-15 00:00:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Moment's Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:13:28 AM AEST
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wow i really like this piece.
Dark very dark.
great write.

Re: Moment's Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:20:27 AM AEST
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Awesome sounded even cooler when I read
it aloud. I loved the title as well it really stuck
out well. Yeah this is awesome Kara it flowed
really well. I hope you are feeling better after
writing this.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Moment's Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:27:41 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
thanks for your comments on my work.
Luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Moment's Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:46:33 PM AEST
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Rhythm flows beautifully.
Enjoyed it Kara.
Thanks for sharing
Elizabeth

Re: Moment's Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:40:23 PM AEST
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Something lovely about
the pureness of the atmosphere
and emotions you
evoke in this.
Unspoiled.

--Ghosty

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