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Mesmerizing

Contributed by freckle on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:31:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Mesmerizing

Mesmerizing
your eyes
can hold
my world

When I gaze
into
their depths

I know
I am loved

There are times
your eyes
hold
our shared laughter

Moments
of inspiration
shine
from your eyes

Deep, deep
sorrow
I know
you feel
your eyes
bare your soul

All
that we share
is revealed
in
the layers
of your eyes

Mesmerizing
your eyes
can hold
my world.

Carol Sossaman
3/14/05




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Re: Mesmerizing (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:35:43 PM AEST
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verry beautiful carol tender love vibes straight from the heart . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Mesmerizing (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:38:45 AM AEST
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What a beautiful expression of love...
Compassionate, deep, magical.

I liked the simplicity of the poem, it holds great beauty in it.


Re: Mesmerizing (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:42:22 AM AEST
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wow deep so deep.


Re: Mesmerizing (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:02:22 AM AEST
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Carol this was such a Mesmerizing write.
It was such a sweet way of showing your love and adoration for your hubby.
I'm glad i got to read this.

Jane ^_^


Re: Mesmerizing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:21:59 PM AEST
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I love the way you used the form to intensify the mezmerizing effect!!
Well done, he is a lucky person!!


Re: Mesmerizing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:45:49 AM AEST
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Awesome poem..... you have such talent!!!


Re: Mesmerizing (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 07:30:26 PM AEST
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Carol ... this is almost like something I would expect to see on a greeting card ... call Hallmark. I mean that as a compliment. It is honest, open, pure and simple ... and great.

Nicely written ~

Nazzy ~




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