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Array ( [sid] => 87437 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love; [time] => 2005-03-14 16:06:56 [hometext] => stop and think a minute, and eternity begins [bodytext] => love; or a universe vast
and abstruse as
life is instruction; a walk thru the caliginosity
of the human heart
and while this candle is no soothsayer (not knowing is half the fun)
i am and will not walk off the edge
as i know where my feet are sure to go

good news is hard to hear in a backwards funnel
the distortion is annoying as
theres much to go and places to do
in a narrow view; a schedule that does not involve idleness; that is
observances of the many nuances called bothersome
(of the pococurante)

though in eternity there is no concept of time
just self image in action of another)

the last we met;
i saw the angle of your eyebrow in variance of degrees
opposite the other as an
action proclaiming declarations of self worth

because the words written inside the book
in black and white are not the
light reflecting off of the cover;
as thoughts reign supreme it is only
application that preserves them
(can i only judge in thought and still be a man of my word,
as if somehow pure, as if my brother employed clairvoyance?) i will be judged
in light of love (and how much i have

(oh how important it is to remember your handshakes go unspoken) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 43 [informant] => electrique_poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

love;

Contributed by electrique_poet on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:06:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

love; or a universe vast
and abstruse as
life is instruction; a walk thru the caliginosity
of the human heart
and while this candle is no soothsayer (not knowing is half the fun)
i am and will not walk off the edge
as i know where my feet are sure to go

good news is hard to hear in a backwards funnel
the distortion is annoying as
theres much to go and places to do
in a narrow view; a schedule that does not involve idleness; that is
observances of the many nuances called bothersome
(of the pococurante)

though in eternity there is no concept of time
just self image in action of another)

the last we met;
i saw the angle of your eyebrow in variance of degrees
opposite the other as an
action proclaiming declarations of self worth

because the words written inside the book
in black and white are not the
light reflecting off of the cover;
as thoughts reign supreme it is only
application that preserves them
(can i only judge in thought and still be a man of my word,
as if somehow pure, as if my brother employed clairvoyance?) i will be judged
in light of love (and how much i have

(oh how important it is to remember your handshakes go unspoken)

Copyright © electrique_poet ... [ 2005-03-14 16:06:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: love; (User Rating: 1 )
by Beniam on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:21:52 AM AEST
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I had to stop and think more than a min on this write, those are some words, good choice tho, interestin write!!! If you ever get a chance you'll have to explain it to me sometime.

Re: love; (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:55:47 PM AEST
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hmm i agree i think i could appriciate this more if given a walk through of all your metaphors and hidden meanings here.

SM

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