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All bloody from battle
I beg of you to let me live
You turn to me and say “WHY”

“Why should I let you live.
You have done so much harm here.
You time has come.
DIE”

As you push your sword through me
All I can do is laugh at you
Because you are so blind

“Killing me will only
Bring your death.”
You pull your sword out
With a smile but

As my blood
Splashes to the ground
Your smile fades
As you feel my dark powers grow

And with my last words I say
“I may die but...
not with out you.."
And then all went dark
Never to return to the light.
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The last battle.

Contributed by dalamar on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

As I lay at your feet.
All bloody from battle
I beg of you to let me live
You turn to me and say “WHY”

“Why should I let you live.
You have done so much harm here.
You time has come.
DIE”

As you push your sword through me
All I can do is laugh at you
Because you are so blind

“Killing me will only
Bring your death.”
You pull your sword out
With a smile but

As my blood
Splashes to the ground
Your smile fades
As you feel my dark powers grow

And with my last words I say
“I may die but...
not with out you.."
And then all went dark
Never to return to the light.

Copyright Â© dalamar ... [ 2005-03-14 13:43:48]
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Re: The last battle. (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:09:32 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
I liked it, mysteriouse, yet clear.
Good job.
MUAH
*~givingin~*

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