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You'll not Believe!

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 11:28:41 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



I saw it descend
With flames from its tail
You should’ve seen them
Their skin was so pale

I found a crash site
Six years and four ago
To keep it a secret
No humans must know

This I had sworn
Or hell would arrive
The Earth as we know it
Just would not survive

It’s safe to speak now
Or so they have told
At last break my silence
Let the story unfold

They listen to us
Our words and our thoughts
Our television pictures
Our ones and naughts

They now where we’re heading
They’ve been there to see
I wish I could pen
Just what they've shown me

You’ll not believe
The beauty I saw
Overwhelming pleasure
Never dreamed of before

Every one of us there
Understand this is why
All life is so precious
Even after we die

Just knowing our fate
And how it’ll unfold
With the polar caps melting
And the tropics become cold

If you wish to know more
Then myself you must ask
Understanding it written
Is an impossible task

In riddles it reads
It’s not, but it’s sad
Just ask my senses
They’ve been thinking I’m mad!




Copyright © Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2002-07-21 11:28:41]
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Re: You'll not Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 06:49:57 PM AEST
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Seems I understand this one quite well. Good write :) It may have been just a dream, but thats all the many folks who have had these same similarities. Makes you wonder... Amber Rose :)


Re: You'll not Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 11:40:03 PM AEST
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Hi Amber, It makes me wonder if they are dreams or messages?
Thankyou for writing
With love
Dean


Re: You'll not Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 08:23:21 PM AEST
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Yes I believe!!!!!!!!!!
Somwhere in the bible it says that Our angels speak 2 us our beds while we're sleeping!!!!!!
It's amazing 2 me of lifes many wonders, dead or alive......
As eternal beings we never die only our bodies jus quit!!!!!!!!
Very good, strong entrancing write!!!!!
MORE, PLEASE???????


Re: You'll not Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 09:03:27 PM AEST
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Thankyou Emystar, I'm trying! But my dreams all seem to revolve around fields of hands grabbing at my feet! It's like they don't want me to take off any more or something? I've learned what I know and only now am I allowed to pass it on, but it's so nonsensical! That and I also try too hard to make things rhyme, which is wrong you can't make poetry happen!
Maybe if I try to stop trying?
With love
Dean


Re: You'll not Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:28:17 AM AEST
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Dean, This is a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. And it does make you wonder.
ShadowsCloud


Re: You'll not Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:32:43 AM AEST
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Well wonder no more Candice,
It's all true!!
And if you believe that, you'll believe anything!Hehehehe
It's nice when I dream like this though.
Thankyou very much, I'm pleased you like

With love
Dean:-)


Re: You'll not Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:45:42 AM AEST
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Dean, I believe most anything, but that is one of my problems, that I am too trusting for my own good.
ShadowsCloud




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