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Array ( [sid] => 87398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BloodINK [time] => 2005-03-14 04:50:08 [hometext] => i wus angry, got disapointed with life altogether and wrote about how i thought it would be.. hope you enjoy xBLOODINKx [bodytext] => I Feel This Feeling
Feels Like Ice,
Cold At Heart,
And Now Im Thinking Twice.

A Knife From The Draw,
Seams To Be Callin
So Im Down On All Four's And Im Crawling
Pickin It Up, Hold It Tightly To My Wrist,
Just A Quick Slip, With A Little Twist,

Watch My Life Spill Before Me,
Start To Cry, Im Sorry Angie Please Dun Cry
My Daughter And Wife Are Still Sleepin
And Im Laying Dieing, Softly Weaping,

I Try To Write This Note, Blood Ink Its True
Dear Angie,And My Baby Girl
Ill Be Lookin Up From Hell,
Looking Under You, Gods Not Gonna Accept Me
For Who I Am, But Im Gonna Love You Both
Right Till The End,

Im Fading Softly, Hoping To Die Quick,
And My Visions Blurry, Seening Clouds Thick,
Staring At The Kitchen Door,
A Figure I See, Staring Crying Down At Me
A Scream From Her Lungs , Fallings To Both Knees.
Im Sorry Angie Forgive Me..Please
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 36 [informant] => BloodsINK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

BloodINK

Contributed by BloodsINK on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:50:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I Feel This Feeling
Feels Like Ice,
Cold At Heart,
And Now Im Thinking Twice.

A Knife From The Draw,
Seams To Be Callin
So Im Down On All Four's And Im Crawling
Pickin It Up, Hold It Tightly To My Wrist,
Just A Quick Slip, With A Little Twist,

Watch My Life Spill Before Me,
Start To Cry, Im Sorry Angie Please Dun Cry
My Daughter And Wife Are Still Sleepin
And Im Laying Dieing, Softly Weaping,

I Try To Write This Note, Blood Ink Its True
Dear Angie,And My Baby Girl
Ill Be Lookin Up From Hell,
Looking Under You, Gods Not Gonna Accept Me
For Who I Am, But Im Gonna Love You Both
Right Till The End,

Im Fading Softly, Hoping To Die Quick,
And My Visions Blurry, Seening Clouds Thick,
Staring At The Kitchen Door,
A Figure I See, Staring Crying Down At Me
A Scream From Her Lungs , Fallings To Both Knees.
Im Sorry Angie Forgive Me..Please

Copyright © BloodsINK ... [ 2005-03-14 04:50:08]
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Re: BloodINK (User Rating: 1 )
by acidicblasphemy on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:41:13 AM AEST
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Very emotional write. I loved it. Keep it up.

-BuTToN-

Re: BloodINK (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:48:18 PM AEST
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*sniffles* wow...aw its soo sad...keep writing like that, but okay here's some constructive critism: if your dyslexic you can still do this cos I am and i can...you write your poem on word and copy it onto here...it gets rid of spelling mistakes and makes the presentation better. xx

Re: BloodINK (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:48:54 PM AEST
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*sniffles* wow...aw its soo sad...keep writing like that, but okay here's some constructive critism: if your dyslexic you can still do this cos I am and i can...you write your poem on word and copy it onto here...it gets rid of spelling mistakes and makes the presentation better. xx

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