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Array ( [sid] => 87396 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Make Me See [time] => 2005-03-14 04:44:08 [hometext] => hope you all like it. i know theres proberly typos and spelling issues.. and i appoligiez, anyways hope you all enjoy.. xBLOODINKx [bodytext] => ive been stolen from
every moment being challanged wrong
nothing today is feelin right
and im holding down this knife,
i dun wanna fight

closed fist, angar rages
im closing eye, and watchin cages
in chains i am, bound by metal,
held my pain , let me settle ,
torture screams, im lossing Identity
losing sanity, love wus nothing but the key

help me , please
this is all i ask
take away the chains , help me pass
eyes crying,Losing hope,
And losing reality ,dreams stream down my face
Losing where i am, to this every place

Over Reaching , For The Sky,
Over Reaching , When Dreams Are To High
Over Crying , When Nothing Here
Over Crying , About My Fear
Over Losing , What I Thought I Had
Over Feeling , This Feeling Of Being Sad
So Help Me , Make Me See
Just The Better Part , You See In Me?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BloodsINK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Make Me See

Contributed by BloodsINK on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:44:08 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

ive been stolen from
every moment being challanged wrong
nothing today is feelin right
and im holding down this knife,
i dun wanna fight

closed fist, angar rages
im closing eye, and watchin cages
in chains i am, bound by metal,
held my pain , let me settle ,
torture screams, im lossing Identity
losing sanity, love wus nothing but the key

help me , please
this is all i ask
take away the chains , help me pass
eyes crying,Losing hope,
And losing reality ,dreams stream down my face
Losing where i am, to this every place

Over Reaching , For The Sky,
Over Reaching , When Dreams Are To High
Over Crying , When Nothing Here
Over Crying , About My Fear
Over Losing , What I Thought I Had
Over Feeling , This Feeling Of Being Sad
So Help Me , Make Me See
Just The Better Part , You See In Me?

Copyright © BloodsINK ... [ 2005-03-14 04:44:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Make Me See (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:08:22 AM AEST
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oh this was so sad but beautifully written I could feel the emotions strongly in this poem great job

Brandy

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