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Array ( [sid] => 87369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DEAR MY MIND [time] => 2005-03-13 20:33:47 [hometext] => I haven't been posting on this site lately bcz i got very few people reading them n barely getting comments... but i said to myself, i will try one more time n see what i'll get...SO here it goes... [bodytext] => Dear my mind,
I counted on you
But you let me down
Tonight I feel tired
Tired of being your slave

Dear my mind,
Is it not enough?
What do you still want?
Tonight I decided
Decided I want out

Dear my mind,
Stop whispering, stop
This time I will lead
Tonight you must be killed
Killed so I can have peace

Dear my mind,
It is time to end
With this gun i shoot
Tonight I will be free
Free of your long-lived reign [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cursed_witch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

DEAR MY MIND

Contributed by cursed_witch on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:33:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dear my mind,
I counted on you
But you let me down
Tonight I feel tired
Tired of being your slave

Dear my mind,
Is it not enough?
What do you still want?
Tonight I decided
Decided I want out

Dear my mind,
Stop whispering, stop
This time I will lead
Tonight you must be killed
Killed so I can have peace

Dear my mind,
It is time to end
With this gun i shoot
Tonight I will be free
Free of your long-lived reign

Copyright © cursed_witch ... [ 2005-03-13 20:33:47]
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Re: DEAR MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 09:06:49 PM AEST
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I loved your poem..i like the way you write.. plz continue postin your poems so i can read them and give you comments..you seeem reli amazing i bet your an amazing person~~Crystal~~

Re: DEAR MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 09:29:25 PM AEST
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"Dear my mind,
I counted on you
But you let me down
Tonight I feel tired
Tired of being your slave"

That's real deep. You write your feelings so....poetically--I guess that's why this is called a poem...but this is different than anything I've read lately. Most of the stuff isn't real poetry, but this is. This write made my speechless and that takes a whole lot of talent. Keep it up.

--Kara

Re: DEAR MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 10:10:20 PM AEST
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This is really good. I love the repitition and the last stanza, but more the last 2 lines
"Tonight i will be free, Free of your long lived reign"

Re: DEAR MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:00:56 AM AEST
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Very good poem..please continue...you have talent :-) venkat

Re: DEAR MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by saphfyre on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:57:34 PM AEST
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I love the pattern on this one... same first lines... the repeating of tonight, and the last line starting with the last word of the next to last line. A little thing, that makes a lot of difference in a poem. Its so deep and silent..... or wanting the silence.... to just want it all to stop. and yes, you DO have a way with endings... Its a great one.

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