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Array ( [sid] => 87355 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love hurts [time] => 2005-03-13 16:58:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tears stroll down my crimson cheeks,
my lips tasting the bitterness of true sorrow.
It's been a day but, feels like weeks have passed,
I guess I just miss you...
Can't escape the whispers in the dark,
and for some odd reason it sounds like you.
And know that we've been torn apart,
and driffed even further.
I relize the feelings I had for you were true.
Looking up at the taunting ceilling
seeing myself alone and knowing that your-
not here for me when I need you the most.
Only being tortured by the loneliness,
hearing the depth of my own breathing.
AlI did was cause you pain
reality has been so cruel
I can't even begin how to explain.
Your eyes as such a piercing blue,
only filled with anger and pain.
You left me with no warnings, signs, or good by's
it came all a sudden, out of know where.
You lifted me up from the start,
holding my head high but, my dreams even higher.
I tried to make sure everything was fine
smiling and grinning just to hide the suffering.
slowily revealing the small amount of time
that we will have together.
I hope all goes well,
this expierence called "LIFE."
I can't say farewell,
I would rather stab myself with a knife. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => sweet_lil_b2003 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
love hurts

Contributed by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:58:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Tears stroll down my crimson cheeks,
my lips tasting the bitterness of true sorrow.
It's been a day but, feels like weeks have passed,
I guess I just miss you...
Can't escape the whispers in the dark,
and for some odd reason it sounds like you.
And know that we've been torn apart,
and driffed even further.
I relize the feelings I had for you were true.
Looking up at the taunting ceilling
seeing myself alone and knowing that your-
not here for me when I need you the most.
Only being tortured by the loneliness,
hearing the depth of my own breathing.
AlI did was cause you pain
reality has been so cruel
I can't even begin how to explain.
Your eyes as such a piercing blue,
only filled with anger and pain.
You left me with no warnings, signs, or good by's
it came all a sudden, out of know where.
You lifted me up from the start,
holding my head high but, my dreams even higher.
I tried to make sure everything was fine
smiling and grinning just to hide the suffering.
slowily revealing the small amount of time
that we will have together.
I hope all goes well,
this expierence called "LIFE."
I can't say farewell,
I would rather stab myself with a knife.




Copyright © sweet_lil_b2003 ... [ 2005-03-13 16:58:14]
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Re: love hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by Banana_babe on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:01:32 PM AEST
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Very good write, I can feel your pain. I am going through tough times my self. I hope things will get better. And I will say it again, very good write.


Re: love hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:47:53 PM AEST
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I feel ya on this flow....


Re: love hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by JasTrask_22 on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:28:51 PM AEST
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Tears stroll down my crimson cheeks,
my lips tasting the bitterness of true sorrow.

that line right there is awesoem.. but dont worry life goes on... and if you're worried about non-living.... then just live life to the fullest now!!

ttyl

JASMINe


Re: love hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 04:53:01 PM AEST
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Wow, that was so strong!
It was really awesome, I can really pick up on the emotions.
I can relate to it... that was great!

Erin




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