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Array ( [sid] => 8733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Someone Like You [time] => 2002-12-17 06:40:00 [hometext] => I wished so much for the perfect guy...or at least mostly perfect. I may have found him. [bodytext] => Someone Like You
I want someone to
kiss away all my hurt and all my pain,
I want someone to tell me they love me,
and not make it in vain.

I want someone to
love me just like this,
I want someone to be there,
even though at times I can be a real *****.

I want someone to
comfort me when I am scared,
I want someone,
that actually really cared.

I want some to
lend me his coat when I am cold,
I want someone to,
be in my arms to hold.

I want someone to
cheer me up when I am blue,
I wanted someone...
someone like you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 25 [informant] => DistortedSuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Someone Like You

Contributed by DistortedSuicide on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Someone Like You
I want someone to
kiss away all my hurt and all my pain,
I want someone to tell me they love me,
and not make it in vain.

I want someone to
love me just like this,
I want someone to be there,
even though at times I can be a real *****.

I want someone to
comfort me when I am scared,
I want someone,
that actually really cared.

I want some to
lend me his coat when I am cold,
I want someone to,
be in my arms to hold.

I want someone to
cheer me up when I am blue,
I wanted someone...
someone like you

Copyright © DistortedSuicide ... [ 2002-12-17 06:40:00]
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Re: Someone Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by dude on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:24:32 PM AEST
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Nice write. I can sense your feelings in the words. My .02 cents: if you would like to attract a man take care of yourself, be confident, smile alot and make him work a little. once you have him let him be exactly as he is and don't force him to change his inner being, ofcourse he is expected to comprimise, but don't make him change something he doesn't. and the same goes for you.....anyway just some advice. let me know if it works...

Re: Someone Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 12:59:11 AM AEST
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buddy! nice name. kinda relates to mine in a way. frozen SUICIDE. distorted SUICIDE. so did the spaces not let ya bhave a space huh? oh well.... haha. do you think i have hte power to commit suicide? ppl are telling me i can.any ways its me, your best freind's sister! HAHAHAHA! NIKKI! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA i found your name! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA but this is a pretty good poem .i likes.

hug a moose!

Re: Someone Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 10:23:30 PM AEST
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aww this is a really sweet, heartfelt poem, and i hope that you really do nd him, because i wish that i found some one like this too...

ali

Re: Someone Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by EmptyWords on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:44:11 AM AEST
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Distorted,Sweet poem.I think we all wish we could find someone like this.I hope the one you have is the one you were looking for and that he looks after you.I also have to agree with the first comment made all the way up there... "We" don't mind that kind of work lol

Peace

Re: Someone Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 02:33:35 PM AEST
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this is a wonderful poem... having dealt with suicide and depression for many years... i had the fortune of meeting my husband, who now instead of dealing with this disease alone, we deal with it together... blessings to you...

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