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Shadowed by my constant fears
In the darkness of drenching tears
As all the glimmer of light fades
With my dreams that've gone away.

The evanescent whispers of dreams
Are eclipsed like the sun's beams
As all hope eludes me on raven's wings
Nevermore to bring

The dreams that I lived for,
Because they are nothing more
Than the delusions of before

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Evanescent Dreams

Contributed by essentially9 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:09:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Evanescent Dreams

Shadowed by my constant fears
In the darkness of drenching tears
As all the glimmer of light fades
With my dreams that've gone away.

The evanescent whispers of dreams
Are eclipsed like the sun's beams
As all hope eludes me on raven's wings
Nevermore to bring

The dreams that I lived for,
Because they are nothing more
Than the delusions of before

...Evermore...

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-03-12 23:09:31]
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Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:12:48 PM AEST
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darkishly pretty. Bringing in nevermore and the raven was craftilly niffty. nice job.!!

Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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Quote the raven: nevermore.....yes good Job Jen....hmph...as always...oh..I liked the shortness

Clark

Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:30:16 PM AEST
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excellent images, beautifully written poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:34:07 AM AEST
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Great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:21:46 AM AEST
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Jen this was so dark and pretty. You really have done something so wonderful and amazing that i wish i could write as good as you.

Anyways i really liked this, i should read more of your poems from now on.

Hugs,
Jane xxx

Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 09:22:52 AM AEST
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yes,excellent

Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:22:10 PM AEST
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So sad. So elegantly written. Very good write Jennifer. Thankyou for sharing. Peace. Laura

Re: Evanescent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:05:16 PM AEST
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WOW!! What a difference just since March...I had to check this one out, as the title was your current 'location' last time I checked...lol I like this write actually, it's a little choppy. The awesome expression and choice wording makes up for it though...You were most definitely made for writing : )

Scorp.

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