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Array ( [sid] => 87299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Phone Conversation [time] => 2005-03-12 21:22:47 [hometext] => all comments are welcome [bodytext] => ‘Hello?’ She said answering the phone

‘Hey! What’s up!’ I said

‘Nothin much, what about you?’ she replied

‘I need to talk to you’ I told her

‘Uh…ok? What’s wrong?’ she replied in a guilty sounding voice

‘A lot of things’ I replied

‘Is it something I did?’ She asked

‘YEA’ I replied

She sat in silence

‘You lied to me’ I said

‘About what?’ She asked

‘Why don’t you think about it’ I replied

She sat in silence again

‘You’ve been tryin to play me. You’ve been messin round with Quazi, and Laylo, and at the same time, telling me how you love me with all of your heart and I am the only one you wanna be with. I was about to take you back too. But you ****** up. What lie do you have to tell me now?’ I told her

‘Uh…’ She replied

‘Was the sex not good? Was I abusive in someway?’ I asked

‘No, everything was great. Especially the sex. It wont happen again…I promise.’ She replied

‘You’re damn right it wont happen again. You can go **** with them, cuz I don’t want nothing to do with you, any more’ I said

‘I only cheated twice’ She said

‘I love you, but you actually cheated on me with about 5 other guys but I only mentioned 2 of em. You say that you changed… How could you have done that? You’re too busy being a ****. Don’t ******* call me again. Stay out of my life, I hope you become a happy and successful person in life, but **** YOU! And don’t call me 70 times tonight in an hour tryin to get me to answer your call cuz im not gonna pick up and I wont ever take you back.’ I said.

‘But…’ She said

‘**** You Bye’

(dial tone)

Erik Bützin
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The Phone Conversation

Contributed by Rhino33 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 09:22:47 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



‘Hello?’ She said answering the phone

‘Hey! What’s up!’ I said

‘Nothin much, what about you?’ she replied

‘I need to talk to you’ I told her

‘Uh…ok? What’s wrong?’ she replied in a guilty sounding voice

‘A lot of things’ I replied

‘Is it something I did?’ She asked

‘YEA’ I replied

She sat in silence

‘You lied to me’ I said

‘About what?’ She asked

‘Why don’t you think about it’ I replied

She sat in silence again

‘You’ve been tryin to play me. You’ve been messin round with Quazi, and Laylo, and at the same time, telling me how you love me with all of your heart and I am the only one you wanna be with. I was about to take you back too. But you ****** up. What lie do you have to tell me now?’ I told her

‘Uh…’ She replied

‘Was the sex not good? Was I abusive in someway?’ I asked

‘No, everything was great. Especially the sex. It wont happen again…I promise.’ She replied

‘You’re damn right it wont happen again. You can go **** with them, cuz I don’t want nothing to do with you, any more’ I said

‘I only cheated twice’ She said

‘I love you, but you actually cheated on me with about 5 other guys but I only mentioned 2 of em. You say that you changed… How could you have done that? You’re too busy being a ****. Don’t ******* call me again. Stay out of my life, I hope you become a happy and successful person in life, but **** YOU! And don’t call me 70 times tonight in an hour tryin to get me to answer your call cuz im not gonna pick up and I wont ever take you back.’ I said.

‘But…’ She said

‘**** You Bye’

(dial tone)

Erik Bützin




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Re: The Phone Conversation (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:45:02 AM AEST
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Actually felt like I was sitting next to you during that conversation. I liked it a lot.




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