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down, down, down the drain
then I look back and sigh
white porcelin by my side
mirror reflects what I see
ten times bigger then what you see
one word caused everything
If you had watched what you said
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Fat

Contributed by PoetBaby814 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:01:25 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

I eat to cover up my pain
down, down, down the drain
then I look back and sigh
white porcelin by my side
mirror reflects what I see
ten times bigger then what you see
one word caused everything
If you had watched what you said
I might not be lying dead

Copyright © PoetBaby814 ... [ 2005-03-12 18:01:25]
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Re: Fat (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:32:39 PM AEST
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very deep and well written. I myself am fat and those that are mean about it cause me to die inside...

Re: Fat (User Rating: 1 )
by BuTTerFly_LoVe on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:50:35 PM AEST
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Hi this goes out to all have weighted light weighted color pale tiny big what ever shape size you are, you are no different then me you or anyone out there... Everyone is the same no one is better then anyone... What people comment about you should not let you feel any else about yourself, nor killing yourse'lf... Why should you listen to what they say when deep down you know you are a better person.. When people have something to say about the other, is because they are jealous or they seek tension... I was very very skinny and people use to tell me i looked ugly and to bonie... But what did they matter to me i was alive and happy to be apart of this wonderful life... Life is a dream live life day by day live life as if tomorrow never comes.. Never let anyone put you down, don't ever let anyone take you're life away because of what they say or think... Be stronger inside you're heart and mind...

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