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Array ( [sid] => 87271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A note.... [time] => 2005-03-12 15:51:37 [hometext] => An email i wrote....when i finally gave up on her. and she asked me what was wrong..if ur looking for rhyme....it isnt ther... [bodytext] => There are a few things that had to be said.....I hoped it wouldnt be like this.

I wonder if theres anything in this world that absolutely petrifies you.
Scares you so much that you have nightmares.
I could never find the opportunity to ask you that.
However theres this one thing that absolutely haunts me,
and im not afraid to admit it

My greatest fear in life is,
that one night when im 40,
i would dream about this surreal face,
something that i'd always wanted to touch.
and that when i wake up the next morning,
the face lying next to me is not the face that i dreamt of last night.

Kind of gave me the chills
.....still does....
and then to go through the torturous ordeal
of thinking about what i did or didnt do or should have done.
And somehow i thought that if i tried hard enough,
then atleast i wouldnt have to have any regrets.
But thats not how life goes.....atleast not for me.

I always wished i didnt have to tell you this.



well...im not confused and im not going through a bad phase.....
ur making me sound like a freak here....and i dont need therapy.

If u give it just a little thought then maybe you'd understand.....
but dont stress yourself...its ok...

Just a passing thought....
maybe im looking for a reason to stay....
i wonder if you've given me one for the last 4 years.
thers only so long that u can do something without reason.....
thers the part where the dream thing comes in.....
ive never given myself a chance to have regrets about life....
maybe thats exactly the reason why i hang on for 4 years,
so that im convinced that ive done everything i possibly could.
Thers been enough opportunity for things to change....but now im convinced
that they arent going to....

maybe i need somebody whos a little more real....and not just a phone
number or email id....that i call or write mails to.
and i said sorry cos i knew u wouldnt understand.....

so in earnest reply honey....nothings wrong....things are just the way
they've always been.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Mangs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
A note....

Contributed by Mangs on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 03:51:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



There are a few things that had to be said.....I hoped it wouldnt be like this.

I wonder if theres anything in this world that absolutely petrifies you.
Scares you so much that you have nightmares.
I could never find the opportunity to ask you that.
However theres this one thing that absolutely haunts me,
and im not afraid to admit it

My greatest fear in life is,
that one night when im 40,
i would dream about this surreal face,
something that i'd always wanted to touch.
and that when i wake up the next morning,
the face lying next to me is not the face that i dreamt of last night.

Kind of gave me the chills
.....still does....
and then to go through the torturous ordeal
of thinking about what i did or didnt do or should have done.
And somehow i thought that if i tried hard enough,
then atleast i wouldnt have to have any regrets.
But thats not how life goes.....atleast not for me.

I always wished i didnt have to tell you this.



well...im not confused and im not going through a bad phase.....
ur making me sound like a freak here....and i dont need therapy.

If u give it just a little thought then maybe you'd understand.....
but dont stress yourself...its ok...

Just a passing thought....
maybe im looking for a reason to stay....
i wonder if you've given me one for the last 4 years.
thers only so long that u can do something without reason.....
thers the part where the dream thing comes in.....
ive never given myself a chance to have regrets about life....
maybe thats exactly the reason why i hang on for 4 years,
so that im convinced that ive done everything i possibly could.
Thers been enough opportunity for things to change....but now im convinced
that they arent going to....

maybe i need somebody whos a little more real....and not just a phone
number or email id....that i call or write mails to.
and i said sorry cos i knew u wouldnt understand.....

so in earnest reply honey....nothings wrong....things are just the way
they've always been.




Copyright © Mangs ... [ 2005-03-12 15:51:37]
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Re: A note.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 03:56:45 PM AEST
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wow...deep i like makes me like wish i wrote this good job


Re: A note.... (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:17:51 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, it really is. your poems, they're just, magic. something sparks across the gaps between your words that sets the whole thing on fire. and i am so sorry. internet/long distance, love hurts. and that face...when you see it, you'll know she's waiting for you somewhere xxx


Re: A note.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:36:53 PM AEST
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This feels....... horribly familiar. (And how I wish that weren't so.)

Incredibly emotive and beautifully expressed. You embed yourself inside the words more than most --- you're incredibly talented, but more importantly - wonderfully human.


Terrified myself (more than I could ever tell you),
~SNM~





Re: A note.... (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:43:29 PM AEST
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Relatable. just so relatable. I've been in this same situation just recently, and it's so sad and yet so liberating at the same time. Things truly were just the way they've always been, l loved that ending to a very touching write. Amazing


Re: A note.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:29:09 PM AEST
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Gee it almost sounds like a Love letter of Regret. It sounds silimar still to me at an earlier time of my life. No one can answer
the question of a dream but you. :-)
I enjoyed the write very much.

Whisper


Re: A note.... (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:19:18 AM AEST
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I'd write but im sorry, you leave me speechless once again.

--amanda--




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