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Array ( [sid] => 87267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mind Pollution [time] => 2005-03-12 14:40:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I see that commercial
Reflecting from the set
In your once beautiful eyes
And it reminds me of addiction
It reminds me of starlit script-readings
Where the ends never justifies the means
And I change the channel
While you apply the Chanel
And the smell makes me drunk with lust
It would have been anger but I simply forgot
Point and click… I’m over it
Desperation marks the spot where
The X once held its place on the map
But like I said before
We simply forget
Where was I before all of this?
Before the flicker from a box
Became so hypnotizing
Before life passed us by
Where was I?
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Mind Pollution

Contributed by diatribe on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:40:27 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I see that commercial
Reflecting from the set
In your once beautiful eyes
And it reminds me of addiction
It reminds me of starlit script-readings
Where the ends never justifies the means
And I change the channel
While you apply the Chanel
And the smell makes me drunk with lust
It would have been anger but I simply forgot
Point and click… I’m over it
Desperation marks the spot where
The X once held its place on the map
But like I said before
We simply forget
Where was I before all of this?
Before the flicker from a box
Became so hypnotizing
Before life passed us by
Where was I?




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Re: Mind Pollution (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:39:09 PM AEST
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Such a haunting poem written with such an
undertone of loss. I don't really know what
else to say except I loved this poem.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Mind Pollution (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:54:54 PM AEST
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this was great, dark and chilling
well done

... in words electrique


Re: Mind Pollution (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:00:09 PM AEST
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wow.. this is amazing.. well done




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