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Array ( [sid] => 87265 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death will Come [time] => 2005-03-12 14:06:08 [hometext] => J.J. [bodytext] => Death will come for me if
I wait kiss my
*** to all who hate

For those who hate
the curse has arose,
and your the ****** bait

It's a curse of evil,
a curse of darkness

It seepes you from benath
so all can see you

Your dyin' and it serves you right
for being a ****** muliputive
bastard, and causing me all this pain

Your ganna die and go to HELL
and old friend I'll see yoy there with
a sword in hand and my heart in the other.

See you in HEll old Friend.

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Death will Come

Contributed by Anti_social on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:06:08 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Death will come for me if
I wait kiss my
*** to all who hate

For those who hate
the curse has arose,
and your the ****** bait

It's a curse of evil,
a curse of darkness

It seepes you from benath
so all can see you

Your dyin' and it serves you right
for being a ****** muliputive
bastard, and causing me all this pain

Your ganna die and go to HELL
and old friend I'll see yoy there with
a sword in hand and my heart in the other.

See you in HEll old Friend.

Copyright © Anti_social ... [ 2005-03-12 14:06:08]
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Re: Death will Come (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:55:46 PM AEST
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I like the first stanza alot....the whole poem would have been better if you would have structured it all properly...

Death will come for me,
If I wait.
Kiss my *** to all who hate!

Like that...its easier to read

but overall I enjoyed reading it....Check your spelling a tad bit more...

Good job and I hope to read more of your work. =]

Clark

Re: Death will Come (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:36:20 PM AEST
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Wow this is a really forever angry write. Gee your write Drrr Ripes of hate . So what is the issue you are raising up in the write? Who's the **** bastard thing . Wow its a curious angry write.

Whisper

Re: Death will Come (User Rating: 1 )
by edwynne on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:56:07 AM AEST
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angry, dark, keep one writing

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