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Array ( [sid] => 87240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Passion [time] => 2005-03-12 00:29:54 [hometext] => Memo to: Mel Gibson [bodytext] => And many years ago he walked upon my face
Indeed they said he came to save the human race
And I recall the beatings that he took
This god was so misunderstood

And many lashes he did bear
Yes much the anguish and despair
But still the crowd chose to condemn
The King of Jews made from a man

The avatar could have brought peace
He could have with one hand at least
Stop the carnage any time
And yet, he chose to stay the line

He dragged that cross across my face
A crown of thorns and bloody lace
And none would help him with this burden
But for a pagan who was barren

And from the cross he left to me
A gift for all humanity
His life a Latin poetry
Your treason now a prosody

Behold you churchmen penitence
Excruciate the man once sentenced
But for a pagan who was barren
You would not even know of heaven [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 11 [informant] => xrockstheheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

The Passion

Contributed by xrockstheheart on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:29:54 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

And many years ago he walked upon my face
Indeed they said he came to save the human race
And I recall the beatings that he took
This god was so misunderstood

And many lashes he did bear
Yes much the anguish and despair
But still the crowd chose to condemn
The King of Jews made from a man

The avatar could have brought peace
He could have with one hand at least
Stop the carnage any time
And yet, he chose to stay the line

He dragged that cross across my face
A crown of thorns and bloody lace
And none would help him with this burden
But for a pagan who was barren

And from the cross he left to me
A gift for all humanity
His life a Latin poetry
Your treason now a prosody

Behold you churchmen penitence
Excruciate the man once sentenced
But for a pagan who was barren
You would not even know of heaven

Copyright © xrockstheheart ... [ 2005-03-12 00:29:54]
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Re: The Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:37:44 AM AEST
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A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: The Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:08:20 AM AEST
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What a poetic write, very nicely done on a tough subject.

Jane ^_^

Re: The Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:58:55 AM AEST
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javier, this is brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa

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