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Array ( [sid] => 8724 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => If I Could [time] => 2002-12-17 05:00:00 [hometext] => There isn't much to say about any of my poems they are just things I see around me everyday and they are usually what Im feeling at the moment. [bodytext] => If I could take one tear drop of your shoulder I would
If I could lift all your pain I would
If I could tell you it will be ok I would
If I could tell you everyday would be happy I would
But I can't
All I can do is tell you I am here
And that I'll be there
To take that tear drop off your shoulder
Lift all your pain
Tell you its ok
And tell you tomorrow will be happy [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 21 [informant] => snagamuffin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

If I Could

Contributed by snagamuffin on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If I could take one tear drop of your shoulder I would
If I could lift all your pain I would
If I could tell you it will be ok I would
If I could tell you everyday would be happy I would
But I can't
All I can do is tell you I am here
And that I'll be there
To take that tear drop off your shoulder
Lift all your pain
Tell you its ok
And tell you tomorrow will be happy

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Re: If I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:40:25 AM AEST
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I think that's all we can do for people who are hurting around us is let them know that we are their for them, this is a beautiful write...with a good message behind it...thanks for sharing it..and welcome to YPDC..i look forward to more of your poetry...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: If I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by Snugglebear on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:38:27 PM AEST
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Hey girl! i loved your poem. and i know what you said is so true...ur a great person and you always will be. I just want you to know that i'm here for you also...that was a great poem and i hope to see alot more in here! Keep it com'n!

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