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Array ( [sid] => 87237 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pieces Apart [time] => 2005-03-12 00:12:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Pieces Apart

February 15, 2005

Please God, don’t let me fall

Into a life with boxed-in walls

Where everyday outside it’s spring

And ghosts slip by unintimidating

I want to live where

The wind can make the leaves applaud

A symphony of natural noise, God

And feel the tingle up my spine

When wishes would be made like mine

I want to heal an injured heart

Put it together from pieces apart

To cross the coals beneath my feet

I want to know I won’t retreat

Please God, let me forget what I have said

Please God, keep my next step un-led.
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Pieces Apart

Contributed by calista on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:12:29 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Pieces Apart

February 15, 2005

Please God, don’t let me fall

Into a life with boxed-in walls

Where everyday outside it’s spring

And ghosts slip by unintimidating

I want to live where

The wind can make the leaves applaud

A symphony of natural noise, God

And feel the tingle up my spine

When wishes would be made like mine

I want to heal an injured heart

Put it together from pieces apart

To cross the coals beneath my feet

I want to know I won’t retreat

Please God, let me forget what I have said

Please God, keep my next step un-led.

Copyright Â© calista ... [ 2005-03-12 00:12:29]
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Re: Pieces Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:39:06 AM AEST
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Awesome.
huggs,
emy

Re: Pieces Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:04:11 AM AEST
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A beautifully written and expressed piece of poetry. So inspiring and uplifting. A truly enjoyable and pleasant read. Thanks for sharing it

Re: Pieces Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:13:37 AM AEST
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I love this, this has to be my favourite line though:

The wind can make the leaves applaud

I just adore that image.

You have some great words, thankyou for sharing.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Pieces Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:47:56 AM AEST
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A very rich poem...nice write!

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