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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => OUR SHOLDERS
[time] => 2005-03-11 23:59:43
[hometext] => inspired by sweetangeluk in response to my write on depression, KILL YOU
[bodytext] =>
A friendship that is built on a lie,
in time will surely die.
But a friendship where the truth is spoken,
will not easily be broken
SultryRose's Signatures
My own depression dippen low again.
Tryin to avert my own sadness, somehow
came to our global family, happy now.
Our shoulders touch as souls merge.
My friend, this one's for you
We can lean on each other shoulders
When times come, my sisters-n-brothers.
repeat
You told what my self healin words meant
How every door closes for you
How your life turned upside down
You dear friend made tears abound.
lean on me, we'll purge on thru
Laying down our own burdens
To help others get thru sad
In Jesus name, Amen!
Extremly rad!
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 226
[topic] => 34
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 45
[ratings] => 9
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
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OUR SHOLDERS
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emystar
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:59:43 PM in AEST
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A friendship that is built on a lie,
in time will surely die.
But a friendship where the truth is spoken,
will not easily be broken
SultryRose's Signatures
My own depression dippen low again.
Tryin to avert my own sadness, somehow
came to our global family, happy now.
Our shoulders touch as souls merge.
My friend, this one's for you
We can lean on each other shoulders
When times come, my sisters-n-brothers.
repeat
You told what my self healin words meant
How every door closes for you
How your life turned upside down
You dear friend made tears abound.
lean on me, we'll purge on thru
Laying down our own burdens
To help others get thru sad
In Jesus name, Amen!
Extremly rad!
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-03-11 23:59:43]
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:18:43 AM AEST
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This is lovely Emy.
It's really great, don't we all wish we had friends like this?
I hope your friendship lasts.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 09:02:59 AM AEST
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Oh Emy this was so very beautiful tears are flowing down my face after reading this.
Life is full of ups and downs. Last year I was laying on the beach without a care in the world. This year I am looking in to the depths of the sea. Challenges are set to try us.
Your words mean more than I could ever convey in words. Through my tears I smile for the love you send shines through my heart and soul.
There is a saying channelling through words and you have just channelled your love right in to my heart. Love right back at you and yours my dear friend from across the miles of oceans. I thank you so very much as your words have once again lifted my spirit.
Love and (((HUGS))))
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 09:56:51 AM AEST
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Emy this was such a stunning write, such a well writen piece hunny.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 05:02:52 PM AEST
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You got talent !
We are here to help one another.
To love is the willing to die for.
Look at our cross Jesus bore.
Keep writing Emystar
Sinned |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:16:28 PM AEST
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this is truely pretty emy girl:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by bernard on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:37:00 AM AEST
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| Sadly Emy Depression can kill.hugs love bernard |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 10:21:25 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written! |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Twisterchaser on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:04:20 PM AEST
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| I do believe if your were to just drop you pen onto a notebook a beautiful poem would appear. |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:43:13 PM AEST
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This is absolutely gorgeous. Its really beautiful and extremely well written, as always. That picture is cute too lol :o)
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by waos on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:38:56 AM AEST
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great quote, gorgeous pic, awesome ending to the poem... gives you
a purpose for feeling like this I guess. Nice job. Thanks for posting.
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:03:50 PM AEST
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Really awesome poem.
Scott |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 07:12:39 AM AEST
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Heart touching..so beautifully written..
that is greatness of friendship to lend a freiendly shoulder at times of sorrow.
God bless.. I love the way you did it.
Hugs Emy.:-) venkat. |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:24:37 PM AEST
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The words are there, but can't be read
So no way to see what the others have said
I guess that makes each message private
May each response encourage your life with it
May your mood improve with each message you poetically express; and be more peaceful with each reply you get
If you ever have a need to share, feel free to PM me
Willofree |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:59:47 PM AEST
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Very very sweet Emystar. And the music goes so beautifully with it.
Love it.
Perhaps if you find time have a lok at my latest postings, they are "Gethsemane and "He was despised"
Happy Easter Emystar
Love
Elizabeth |
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Re: OUR SHOLDERS
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by Kie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:12:47 AM AEST
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Sometimes our shoulders carry burdens and one good friend that you can lean on makes the journey of life so much easier.
Loved this poem Em.
Kie |
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