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You left me here.
Why did you go?

I want to leave...

You said not to fallow.
My worst fear.
A suicide note.

To be with you...

I feel so hallow.
Another eye full of tears.
Another cough in my throat.

My only love...

Leaving me with a deathblow.
To plague my dreams for years.
You are now my broken hope.

I'm coming to you...

You said "Please Don't Fallow Me".
You must forgive me I cannot fulfill your final wish.
I'm sorry...I must die,
To be by your side.
...
I'm sorry...this world is too cold,
To be without you.
...
I must do, what you asked me not to,
I must,
Fallow
You
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Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:23:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A nightmare filled full of sorrow.
You left me here.
Why did you go?

I want to leave...

You said not to fallow.
My worst fear.
A suicide note.

To be with you...

I feel so hallow.
Another eye full of tears.
Another cough in my throat.

My only love...

Leaving me with a deathblow.
To plague my dreams for years.
You are now my broken hope.

I'm coming to you...

You said "Please Don't Fallow Me".
You must forgive me I cannot fulfill your final wish.
I'm sorry...I must die,
To be by your side.
...
I'm sorry...this world is too cold,
To be without you.
...
I must do, what you asked me not to,
I must,
Fallow
You
...

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-03-11 19:23:00]
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:32:57 PM AEST
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lovely poems pt.1 and pt.2 greatly written,tho so sad.

Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:20:05 PM AEST
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hauntingly beautiful... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:41:21 PM AEST
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reminds me of poe. he, too, was greatly unappreciated in his time. 14 bucks for the raven...how pathetic...

Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:04:37 PM AEST
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I love this part:

My worst fear
A suicide note

You don't know how much that gets to me. That is one of my biggest fears as well. I don't want to end up going under because of my fear. I didn't know there was anyone else that had a fear such as that. Great write...

Jodi

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