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Array ( [sid] => 87203 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lying awake at night [time] => 2005-03-11 17:16:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Lying awake at night,
there is a brief jolt of relief,
as the intruder freezes, who
once was a lonely man that spoke
in rambles, who cleared the edge off with heat
and chemicals, and who now,
on his last whim, falters,
to the point of spite and infamy,
echoing the voice of gods and godesses
slumbering in the mist of humanity's
imagination.

There is imagination in his eyes.
Maybe that is why he is the intruder,
because those who possess the unknown potential
of human possibilities are always denied,
rejected, thrown down in the eyes of others,
reduced to the level of rats,
in that their only purpose is to fuel
your purpose, to hunt, to kill
that which confronts what is true,
which stands at your feet and pokes at the bruise,
that you thought, too ordinary to cover up, that you
neglected in order to serve your goods----or rather your lies
that you dress in million dollar molds. And foolishly,
you believe that you are fooling everyone.
But you are not fooling him.

The intruder,
he who stands naked before the judge,
who does not flinch, but winks in the blind light, open,
who is willing to die at every moment,
who holds the fire in his eyes that burns through you,
because all of your lies are ashes now,
and the last crumb left of your real self is fear,
the birthplace of deciet, of your indignation,
of the last insufferable breath in your lungs,
and on your last gasp, you will know that it is not
him who has frozen, but you, because
any last bit of authenticity left in you has been
swept under the rug to decay in time,
and you are left paralyzed, regretting the instant
that you chose to turn away from that which you knew
to be true.
































































































































































































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Lying awake at night

Contributed by zenmind on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Lying awake at night,
there is a brief jolt of relief,
as the intruder freezes, who
once was a lonely man that spoke
in rambles, who cleared the edge off with heat
and chemicals, and who now,
on his last whim, falters,
to the point of spite and infamy,
echoing the voice of gods and godesses
slumbering in the mist of humanity's
imagination.

There is imagination in his eyes.
Maybe that is why he is the intruder,
because those who possess the unknown potential
of human possibilities are always denied,
rejected, thrown down in the eyes of others,
reduced to the level of rats,
in that their only purpose is to fuel
your purpose, to hunt, to kill
that which confronts what is true,
which stands at your feet and pokes at the bruise,
that you thought, too ordinary to cover up, that you
neglected in order to serve your goods----or rather your lies
that you dress in million dollar molds. And foolishly,
you believe that you are fooling everyone.
But you are not fooling him.

The intruder,
he who stands naked before the judge,
who does not flinch, but winks in the blind light, open,
who is willing to die at every moment,
who holds the fire in his eyes that burns through you,
because all of your lies are ashes now,
and the last crumb left of your real self is fear,
the birthplace of deciet, of your indignation,
of the last insufferable breath in your lungs,
and on your last gasp, you will know that it is not
him who has frozen, but you, because
any last bit of authenticity left in you has been
swept under the rug to decay in time,
and you are left paralyzed, regretting the instant
that you chose to turn away from that which you knew
to be true.




































































































































































































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Re: Lying awake at night (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:04:15 PM AEST
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Perfect. Beautiful. Breath-taking.

My deaerst Zenmind... you've done it again, lol. I have no clue why no one has comented on this, but they are most surely missing out on a wonderful masterpiece!! Surreal, excellent flow, and awesome images!!! LOVE IT!!! More later, cheri ami! All my love. Forever,

Your friend,

Stephy!


Re: Lying awake at night (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:40:07 AM AEST
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powerful poem, and thought prevoking. the end was amazing. a masterpiece and nothing less.


Re: Lying awake at night (User Rating: 1 )
by Nardo on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:44:57 AM AEST
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You take my breath away, Zen!
I hope your not gone and believe me, your not forgotten.
Nardo




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