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Array ( [sid] => 8717 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => When I first saw you [time] => 2002-12-17 02:40:00 [hometext] => Have you ever known somone so beautiful that you just can't stop starring at them? this poem was inspired by Lisa. I met her while on vacation. We shared about 1 day and 1 night together (nothing sexual happaned, I had to leave) unfortunatly she probably forgot all about me, but as you can see she left me with a beautiful memory. Thank you Lisa.......

Sincerly, you balcony buddy..... [bodytext] => Wicked thoughts of desire flooded my mind. The touch of your lustrous smooth skin was blazed into my being Your engaging scent was carved into my memory. I envisioned your sultry red lips pleasantly entangled with mine in lustful passion. I imagined the spine-tingling feel of your warm supple body pressed against me. As you walked away, I memorized your shapely lines and rhythm of the swagger created from your delicious round hips and long muscular legs. That was the instant I began to feel the ecstasy and zeal for life. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 30 [informant] => dude [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
When I first saw you

Contributed by dude on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



Wicked thoughts of desire flooded my mind. The touch of your lustrous smooth skin was blazed into my being Your engaging scent was carved into my memory. I envisioned your sultry red lips pleasantly entangled with mine in lustful passion. I imagined the spine-tingling feel of your warm supple body pressed against me. As you walked away, I memorized your shapely lines and rhythm of the swagger created from your delicious round hips and long muscular legs. That was the instant I began to feel the ecstasy and zeal for life.




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Re: When I first saw you (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:45:17 AM AEST
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I say we take up a donation for you to go find her ....be wild and free and go with your heart and find the woman geez...lol i cant help it im a sucker for love...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...it's very beautiful...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: When I first saw you (User Rating: 1 )
by peterdoswell on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:43:28 AM AEST
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Wonderful words no doubt you wish you had spoken ? Well Done !


Re: When I first saw you (User Rating: 1 )
by Bunty on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:35:19 AM AEST
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Meow!


Re: When I first saw you (User Rating: 1 )
by dude on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:03:03 PM AEST
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thanks for the "meow"..... That also describes what i was feeling that day.

-doug




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