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[aid] => mick
[title] => palamino
[time] => 2005-03-11 06:00:23
[hometext] => for becca
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i look out into the deep dark night
and what i see beneath the security light,
is our palamino horse sunshine
looking wet but having a fun time,
too stubborn to go into the barn
but that is part of her beautiful charm,
tonight the mountain brings the rains
pitch black no starshine upon her mane,
she is a free spirit; both heart and soul
living near her makes me balanced and whole,
for horses are magnificent that is quite clear
and that special lady to us is so dear,
shes had foals under our windows; such a
beautiful sight as she nickers and blows,
when they took those first wobblie steps
then one day galloped with tremendous pep,
but tonight she stands alone in thought
maybe about all her life has brought her,
only a few steps to a warm barn filled with hay
where the wet stormy night; could give in to day,
but sunshine loves weather, the worse the better
we have a lot in common and remain unfettered,
there is a moon up there way high in the sky
alas, cannot see it, for its above clouds so high,
upon this earthy forest floor; trees drip crystal dew
the air is fresh and sweet; makes you feel new,
sometimes i think my life is trees, walnut, oak, elms
far above the cities; in this woodsy wilderness realm,
i know this moment won't last forever, it too must end
as i look deep into the pastures
and see my sweet friend.
§* *§
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[score] => 60
[ratings] => 12
[editpoem] => 1
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palamino
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:00:23 AM in AEST
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i look out into the deep dark night
and what i see beneath the security light,
is our palamino horse sunshine
looking wet but having a fun time,
too stubborn to go into the barn
but that is part of her beautiful charm,
tonight the mountain brings the rains
pitch black no starshine upon her mane,
she is a free spirit; both heart and soul
living near her makes me balanced and whole,
for horses are magnificent that is quite clear
and that special lady to us is so dear,
shes had foals under our windows; such a
beautiful sight as she nickers and blows,
when they took those first wobblie steps
then one day galloped with tremendous pep,
but tonight she stands alone in thought
maybe about all her life has brought her,
only a few steps to a warm barn filled with hay
where the wet stormy night; could give in to day,
but sunshine loves weather, the worse the better
we have a lot in common and remain unfettered,
there is a moon up there way high in the sky
alas, cannot see it, for its above clouds so high,
upon this earthy forest floor; trees drip crystal dew
the air is fresh and sweet; makes you feel new,
sometimes i think my life is trees, walnut, oak, elms
far above the cities; in this woodsy wilderness realm,
i know this moment won't last forever, it too must end
as i look deep into the pastures
and see my sweet friend.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: palamino
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:04:02 AM AEST
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Truly beautiful! Awwwww I've missed poems like this. Is that pic sunshine? Gorgeous. :o ) soooo beautiful! This is exactly what I wanted to read. Written to perfection, as always, and then some. I love it *huggles* thank you.
Hugs, kisses 'n moobhas.
- Becca
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by venkat on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:23:43 AM AEST
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Awwww.. Nessa...it is spell binding. absolutely beautiful and magnificent work...
Ohhoo..big hugs for sharing such a fascinating poem :-) venkat |
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:49:34 AM AEST
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| Reading this was truly a pleasure. |
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:34:44 AM AEST
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awww Nessa I have missed you soo much, that was so beautiful and lovely, as are you hun *hugs*
pix xx |
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:42:35 AM AEST
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This is lovely, Nessa, beautiful and so full of images, I could almost see what you see.
Such a gorgeous write for a beautiful person,
*hugs* Phil xxx
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:48:05 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Ness..Good to see you posting again.....
Hugs and Love,
Jenni |
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:54:02 PM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful and very heartwarming
Shari |
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:47:30 PM AEST
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| It's always a pleasure to read your beautiful poems Nessa ... lovely write ... Jan |
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:06:58 AM AEST
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oh Nessa this was absolutely a delightful and enjoyable read I loved it.. Wow and the music just goes perfect with the poem as well
Brandy |
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by bernard on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:43:15 AM AEST
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| LadyFawn what a beautiful poem I felt as if I was there and could feel the rain, Palamino is indeed a kindred spirit. I too loved to be out in all weathers now I just sit by a warm fire and wait for the spring. 5/5 from bern Hugs and love. |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:16:06 PM AEST
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beautiful work once again nessa
johnny. |
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:23:44 PM AEST
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Aww this is so beautiful! Sounds really peacefull.
Scott |
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:10:02 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful peaceful and calming. I love the tune playing one of my fav tunes.
Wonderful
Love Angelxxxxx |
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:56:06 PM AEST
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I just wanted to see my comment in blue.
But seriously,
excellent work on this.
You are back in top form.
--Ghosty |
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Re: palamino
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:22:24 AM AEST
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Gorgeous piece.
How I've missed out on such magnificent work. :) |
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:32:09 AM AEST
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Wow my friend, this is heavenly beautifull.
a masterpeice.
I too have missed your great writes.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: palamino
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by Overstated on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 12:29:46 PM AEST
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| I thought this was beautiful really thought through and well paced. excellent work ladyfawn! p.s and the horse looks so cool! |
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by Twisterchaser on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:11:22 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem, about a beautiful horse, by a beautyful lady, enough said, |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:15:13 PM AEST
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Your love of horses so shines through!!!!
This is a wonderful, gentle and uplifting piece!!! |
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Re: palamino
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 05:56:20 AM AEST
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This is so sweet and peaceful,
most probably -YOU Ladyfawn- is shining through this beautiful poem!
cheers!~ |
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by Archie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:32:59 PM AEST
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| Great poem as always. I have missed reading your works since I have been away. Poems like this are one of the reasons i am glad to be back at YPDC |
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Re: palamino
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:14:27 AM AEST
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| Dearest Nessa, Somewhere over the rainbow, your words are glimmering in a field of beauty, as they are here. This was a spectacular vision to behold. (((Nessa))) Angel always...joni |
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by reflections on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:24:50 AM AEST
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As a resident of the piney woods of east Texas I much enjoyed this beautiful tribute to your animal friend. There is no doubt as to your attachment. On a parallel level, there is also no question as to your immense creative talent. Thanks for reading one of mine . . . otherwise, it may have taken a long time to work my way through the list of members until I found your wonderful site on my own. I will return for more of your gentle, and lovely words. Kudos!
John
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by OnAngelswings on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:32:52 PM AEST
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| This ia such a sweet,wonderful poem...I sit and read and just imagine what I'm reading...your a wonderful writter.....Shari :) |
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:41:59 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa! Better late than never.
The fact is, I will eventually work myself around on the sites, - I was away for a long time.
Your words have such incomparable beauty, and reflect the depth and greatness of your soul. The other commenters have already said how deeply touched they are,
Be blessed abundantly
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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Re: palamino
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:56:59 AM AEST
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| Horses are great - had a horse once. Her name was Snowball and she was white.. Had a lot of fun with Snowball just riding her. |
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Re: palamino
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 06:46:34 PM AEST
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Nessa this is such a lovely write, the joy you take in animals and nature is clearly evident in every line. Palamino has always seemed to me to be a very evocative word, and it made a wonderful title for your poem.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: palamino
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by colinb on
Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 10:29:34 PM AEST
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| beautiful Nessa i love the picture |
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