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Array ( [sid] => 87140 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood Green [time] => 2005-03-10 21:56:16 [hometext] => I started this poem long ago and finished it yesterday. it has many meanings, you find the one that is best for you. this is similar in style to my other poem 'Journey' [bodytext] => Born in blood, green with envy
His fire burns, how can that be?
Still he shines with brighter blazing
and stands so tall among his peers

Head held high, he walks so proudly
not proud enough to hide his scars
They point and laugh while he passes
He never says a word to them

Adventure waits around his corner
He’ll leave this town of heartless stone
He won’t forget those that loved him
And dream about them late at night

Arriving where his feet have led him
He looks around his new found land
Such life and promise lay before him
Death and horror they behind

Now his fate will meet his future
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Blood Green

Contributed by MLCstar on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Born in blood, green with envy
His fire burns, how can that be?
Still he shines with brighter blazing
and stands so tall among his peers

Head held high, he walks so proudly
not proud enough to hide his scars
They point and laugh while he passes
He never says a word to them

Adventure waits around his corner
He’ll leave this town of heartless stone
He won’t forget those that loved him
And dream about them late at night

Arriving where his feet have led him
He looks around his new found land
Such life and promise lay before him
Death and horror they behind

Now his fate will meet his future

Copyright Â© MLCstar ... [ 2005-03-10 21:56:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Blood Green (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:00:30 PM AEST
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ooo i like

Re: Blood Green (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:31:51 AM AEST
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This is a good write but I feel like there is more to it....I want to know what his future is...thanks for sharing!

Carol

Re: Blood Green (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:38:08 PM AEST
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This is a really good write. I am not sure what else to say about this one. It is just really good...
Jodi

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