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Array ( [sid] => 87127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mommy Dearest [time] => 2005-03-10 20:58:53 [hometext] => not sure what this should go under [bodytext] => Why you hate me,
I'll never understand.
What did I do?
I didn't ask to be born,
neither did my brothers.
We were brought into this world
but your request only.
And now you treat us like criminals,
because we're obviously no good.
I do my best,
I really do.
Do you really think I want to take the advance courses?
Do you really think I like doing reports?
But I do it for you.
And what do I get?
A lovely “get of your lazy ass”
from that's right,
mommy dearest.
Do you really think,
I want to live?
Don't you think,
the knives appeal to me,
the backyard pool as well?
Believe me,
its crossed my mind,
but I'm such a wuss,
I'd never find the strength,
to die,
to go to heaven,
sweet heaven,
will I will be perfect.
Or at least my flaws will go unnoticed,
respected even.
I can wait till I'm older,
and leave your house.
I'll have my own house,
own life,
own family.
And that mother dearest,
is all that keeps me alive [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 43 [informant] => AngelOnFire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Mommy Dearest

Contributed by AngelOnFire on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:58:53 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Why you hate me,
I'll never understand.
What did I do?
I didn't ask to be born,
neither did my brothers.
We were brought into this world
but your request only.
And now you treat us like criminals,
because we're obviously no good.
I do my best,
I really do.
Do you really think I want to take the advance courses?
Do you really think I like doing reports?
But I do it for you.
And what do I get?
A lovely “get of your lazy ass”
from that's right,
mommy dearest.
Do you really think,
I want to live?
Don't you think,
the knives appeal to me,
the backyard pool as well?
Believe me,
its crossed my mind,
but I'm such a wuss,
I'd never find the strength,
to die,
to go to heaven,
sweet heaven,
will I will be perfect.
Or at least my flaws will go unnoticed,
respected even.
I can wait till I'm older,
and leave your house.
I'll have my own house,
own life,
own family.
And that mother dearest,
is all that keeps me alive

Copyright Â© AngelOnFire ... [ 2005-03-10 20:58:53]
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Re: Mommy Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:22:48 AM AEST
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With a little more thought and a bit more passion, this would perfect. I liked the entire poem, but realize that it needs more passion and thought. Thank you much for sharing. I did like it you know.

Re: Mommy Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:44:11 AM AEST
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INTRESTING! WE DIDN'T MAKE OUR PARENTS,THEY MADE US!! YOU'RE RIGHT,IT'S ALL THEIR STUPID FAULT & NOT OURS!!! GREAT POEM-ROCK ON!!!!

DAN!!!!!

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