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Array ( [sid] => 87126 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drip Drop [time] => 2005-03-10 20:55:25 [hometext] => This poem is alot like another poem on this site (no I did not copy, I just noticed it when I was lookin through the site) but i still like mine more lol, even if it isn't as good, well I'll let you judge that. [bodytext] => Drip Drop goes the water
masking my sobs,
drip drop, crimson tears rolling down my checks
And now your holding me,
Like you love me,
Like you want to be holding me,
for the first time in months.
But I can't hear you,
can't read your lips,
your miles away,
yet I feel your warmth,
you regret,
your sorrow,
because you pushed me aside,
Because of all the hatred you threw at your daughter,
your only daughter
I can hear the sirens
Almost see the lights.
But the presence of both is faint,
they are over run by my crimson tears.
What?
Whats that sound?
That beeping,
is it my pulse?
NO!
Stop it!
I want to die,
your smiling now,
stop it,
this isn't what I wanted.
I wanted to die.
Just let me go,
stop torturing me,
your doing me no favor.
The pain is overwhelming,
it makes my poor wrist throb.
Damn it,
I almost had it,
and now your right here
whispering to me.
And all I want to do is smack you,
why can't you just let me die? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 36 [informant] => AngelOnFire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Drip Drop

Contributed by AngelOnFire on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:55:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Drip Drop goes the water
masking my sobs,
drip drop, crimson tears rolling down my checks
And now your holding me,
Like you love me,
Like you want to be holding me,
for the first time in months.
But I can't hear you,
can't read your lips,
your miles away,
yet I feel your warmth,
you regret,
your sorrow,
because you pushed me aside,
Because of all the hatred you threw at your daughter,
your only daughter
I can hear the sirens
Almost see the lights.
But the presence of both is faint,
they are over run by my crimson tears.
What?
Whats that sound?
That beeping,
is it my pulse?
NO!
Stop it!
I want to die,
your smiling now,
stop it,
this isn't what I wanted.
I wanted to die.
Just let me go,
stop torturing me,
your doing me no favor.
The pain is overwhelming,
it makes my poor wrist throb.
Damn it,
I almost had it,
and now your right here
whispering to me.
And all I want to do is smack you,
why can't you just let me die?




Copyright © AngelOnFire ... [ 2005-03-10 20:55:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Drip Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:48:49 PM AEST
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good job i liked reading it . keep it up !


Re: Drip Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by Anti_social on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:17:55 PM AEST
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That was really great, I feel like I was somehow part of the peom, if that makes any sence!




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