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Array ( [sid] => 87103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Picture perfect [time] => 2005-03-10 19:03:21 [hometext] => It takes two people to build a healthy relationship...not one...this is what happens when theres one lover...and the ignorant, inconsiderate, monster whom feeds off your desparation. [bodytext] =>
Desperate in definite cool color,
Can you frame this portrait of your self?
I have seen you from every point of view,
Besides the one I’m viewing now.
Your good side never impressed me, so believe when I say..
I’ve seen more character in an animal.
At least they respect theyre animal nature,
At least they dont eat each others hearts.
So what do you think of yourself now?
youll never have what couldve been ours.
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Picture perfect

Contributed by CannablissJunkie on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:03:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

Desperate in definite cool color,
Can you frame this portrait of your self?
I have seen you from every point of view,
Besides the one I’m viewing now.
Your good side never impressed me, so believe when I say..
I’ve seen more character in an animal.
At least they respect theyre animal nature,
At least they dont eat each others hearts.
So what do you think of yourself now?
youll never have what couldve been ours.

Copyright Â© CannablissJunkie ... [ 2005-03-10 19:03:21]
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Re: Picture perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:33:31 PM AEST
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Great write. Would have to agree with the line~~I've seen more character in an animal~~I know a few humans I've felt that way about. Peace to you. Laura

Re: Picture perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:54:40 PM AEST
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OooOooO... wow. Now this one has a bit of emotions in it. Harsh... but in a good way. There are people like that, and I am not saying that it is wrong of you to be harsh because many deserve it. That is a great, great write. Fantastic, and really deep with anger...
Jodi

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