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[aid] => mick
[title] => Surrender
[time] => 2005-03-10 18:39:51
[hometext] => This is Not ONLY about me but has a mix of someone i really care abotu in it!
[bodytext] => Surrender! All these intense feelings They make me want to give in i try to be brave but there is just some much pain Rushing within rightnow i feel like letting it all go just to take this tip and and Tear into my soul just to watch the red drips Silently fall on this Blood covered bath i finally realize that everyone knew i wouldn't last memories come crashing back its to late now that past is no longer the past i give in and serrender to this sharp blade i fall to the ground blood draining out of my face i went to deep i guess i meant it I just want to go to sleep and wake up in a place where i don't exist i taste death i know it is coming near and with every breathe i want it dream it crave it even more i just want to see if there is something beyonde here a place where no one feels a place were pain isn't in the air im lying silently on the bathroom floor my face is pale And nothing is here ive almost died All i wanted was maybe just maybe there might be a hope for me somewhere once again this only world i have ever known deserted me left me dying my cry out for help meant nothing to the conceited people of this generation they were all cought up in there own lives they they didn't hear my silent screams how about now? .. im lying here with little life left in me i say to the world with my last few heart beats You were all fake anyways im just glad its done glad its over glad i surrendered Now here with no movement see how you feel! [comments] => 0 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 36 [informant] => RazorBladeWar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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