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Microchip in your body like Blood of Christ
I fast forty days and pray for forty nights
Return to the essence of Life for all life
Conceived in the Earth and placed upon walls
Resting in the pyramid, wake when night falls
Bless me with the gat and clips to be injected
To the next life it changed my whole perspective
Slaughtering my children - Gentiles and Romans
I'm holding - swords and gats for evil omens
Mark of the beast imprint were being sewed in
To the last day they say - world exploding
1999 ?
Internet web control your whole mind
My third eye shine insight to lead the blind
A hundred and forty-four thousand more crimes
A fugitive who's wanted by feds of all kinds
For waking up thugs and showing them true signs
For the blind?
Two-Five, forever shine
Been on this planet for 19 years but still bleeding
Internally - trapped in Hell but still breathing
Caught up in the hell fire State - Garden of Eden
Millennia surround my life for wrong reasons
I didn't ask to be here, God, see I was placed
Amongst Canaanites with sixs carved in faces
Holding all the gods up north behind gates
Amorites ruling the world and all states
True lies coming from tongues of true snakes
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DAY DREAMIN

Contributed by compton-tre-block on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:30:44 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Im like a Neanderthal trapped in ice to be precise
Microchip in your body like Blood of Christ
I fast forty days and pray for forty nights
Return to the essence of Life for all life
Conceived in the Earth and placed upon walls
Resting in the pyramid, wake when night falls
Bless me with the gat and clips to be injected
To the next life it changed my whole perspective
Slaughtering my children - Gentiles and Romans
I'm holding - swords and gats for evil omens
Mark of the beast imprint were being sewed in
To the last day they say - world exploding
1999 ?
Internet web control your whole mind
My third eye shine insight to lead the blind
A hundred and forty-four thousand more crimes
A fugitive who's wanted by feds of all kinds
For waking up thugs and showing them true signs
For the blind?
Two-Five, forever shine
Been on this planet for 19 years but still bleeding
Internally - trapped in Hell but still breathing
Caught up in the hell fire State - Garden of Eden
Millennia surround my life for wrong reasons
I didn't ask to be here, God, see I was placed
Amongst Canaanites with sixs carved in faces
Holding all the gods up north behind gates
Amorites ruling the world and all states
True lies coming from tongues of true snakes




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Re: DAY DREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:41:50 PM AEST
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Very good. I really liked how you mixed the biblical stuff with todays words. Keep em rollin.

Carol


Re: DAY DREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:42:07 PM AEST
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Brother, this was good. You know I am a big fan of yours. (the hippie and the gangster, hee hee) You are a wonderful, expressive writer my friend. I always stop when I see your name. Much peace to you. Laura




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