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Array ( [sid] => 87085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => End of Search [time] => 2005-03-10 17:54:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm so hungry
It's not for food I long
I'm starving to find
the place where I belong

I looked in one place
And I stayed for awhile
But I felt as insecure
As a young and foolish child

So to the next spot
On I went
There I stopped
Grew even more bent

The third place I found
I wanted to stay
But the happiness ended
Lasted only a few days

I kept to myself
I was my only friend
But I found a fourth place
Where my search would end

My new friend
Had nothing missing
I could depend on him
To always be listening

He helped me elimanate all of the frauds
My new friends name is simply "God" [comments] => 1 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 11 [informant] => dreamer_for_eternity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

End of Search

Contributed by dreamer_for_eternity on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:54:10 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

I'm so hungry
It's not for food I long
I'm starving to find
the place where I belong

I looked in one place
And I stayed for awhile
But I felt as insecure
As a young and foolish child

So to the next spot
On I went
There I stopped
Grew even more bent

The third place I found
I wanted to stay
But the happiness ended
Lasted only a few days

I kept to myself
I was my only friend
But I found a fourth place
Where my search would end

My new friend
Had nothing missing
I could depend on him
To always be listening

He helped me elimanate all of the frauds
My new friends name is simply "God"

Copyright © dreamer_for_eternity ... [ 2005-03-10 17:54:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: End of Search (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:11:47 PM AEST
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I am not sure if I liked the beginning. The whole food part was just weird. I got it, but it didn't seemed need. It could be needed to make the rhyme, but it is just weird. Now I really, really liked the rest of the poem. The whole message of the poem was great and it was written very smoothly and nicely. This is an amazing poem. Great write...
Jodi

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