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[title] => A World I Hate
[time] => 2002-12-16 23:20:00
[hometext] => This is something I wrote about a year ago on my computer, and I decided to put it on here. It's not really suicide poetry, but this is the best way to describe it.
[bodytext] => I feel so trapped, everything is always the same, I wish I could leave, but where would I go. Everyday is repetitive, there is nothing to look forward to. Nothing to live for, I want to leave and experience something new, something exciting but there is nothing I can do. I want to get out of here, I want to go away, somewhere quiet might have workded, but that's not what I want to do, this place is so ***** repetitive, I'm getting sick and tired of it. ***** this world, ***** everything, I tried something new, it didn't work, I want to get out of everything, I feel this time is just borrowed time, nothing is important anymore, nothing is good. I hate this world, I want to leave, but I can't I'm too afraid to, afaid to leave, afraid to end everything. Afraid to leave this world that I hate.
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A World I Hate
Contributed by
Merd
on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel so trapped, everything is always the same, I wish I could leave, but where would I go. Everyday is repetitive, there is nothing to look forward to. Nothing to live for, I want to leave and experience something new, something exciting but there is nothing I can do. I want to get out of here, I want to go away, somewhere quiet might have workded, but that's not what I want to do, this place is so ***** repetitive, I'm getting sick and tired of it. ***** this world, ***** everything, I tried something new, it didn't work, I want to get out of everything, I feel this time is just borrowed time, nothing is important anymore, nothing is good. I hate this world, I want to leave, but I can't I'm too afraid to, afaid to leave, afraid to end everything. Afraid to leave this world that I hate.
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Merd
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2002-12-16 23:20:00]
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Re: A World I Hate
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by thousandfold on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 12:01:48 AM AEST
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your anger and frustration are really clear in this poem. i completely understand the feeling... when nothing seems good anymore, when there's too many bad things going on... but you can't leave because you're afraid. afraid of change i suppose? since the world, awful as it is, is at least familiar.
just my $0.02. :)
great job, hope to read more of your poetry in the future.
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Re: A World I Hate
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:08:40 AM AEST
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Wow Merd this is really sad, i really hope this is fictional an not how your really feeling...if you needa talk i dont mind listenin im a good listener....my heart is right there with ya....Keep em' coming i wanna read more of your poetry k?
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Re: A World I Hate
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by Blue on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:37:28 PM AEST
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i can totally relate michelle, and you know that. keep your head up & look for the beautiful experiences of everyday. Like last night--Tim with his arm around you, Shawn trying to "kiss" you...you have a better life than you think....
and you can always talk to me about it dear.
i hope you know that.
Marisa |
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